| Reviews for Harry Stark and the Spirit of Iron |
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   Kaiimei chapter 6 . 7/21 I find it slightly ridiculous how nobody thought that perhaps bottling up the Obscurus-like creature was a terrible idea. Honestly, it's like telling someone that it's totally fine to never show pain or fear or emotion, it'll build into a crescendo, and when that happens, rather than a small wash of emotions regularly, it's an utter mental breakdown. For all their intelligence, sometimes the obvious way to act slips under their noses. |
| Nargelz chapter 11 . 7/12 You know his rings remind me of the infinity stones with their powers and colours but switched around and theirs obviously more in this fanfic even tho not all would be on earth at this time |
| Nargelz chapter 7 . 7/12 I just realised theirs no Rhodey! |
| Nargelz chapter 7 . 7/12 Please tell me Harry’s gonna be okay and not overtooken by voldy |
| Fencer22 chapter 11 . 7/11 I’m torn. This is really well written but for fucks sake enough with the ever escalating tension! Bleagh* sorry. It’s great writing and an interesting plot, but the ever escalating tension in a movie theater works because the movies only two hours, reading this has taken closer to four maybe five? I wasn’t paying super close attention. Point is it’s exhausting and there is still more escalating tension to come. Great work. Just need to go find something a bit more lighthearted to read for awhile. |
| A Simple Library chapter 11 . 7/3 Don't abandon it! I want more~! |
| A Simple Library chapter 9 . 7/3 Okay, now this, I can get by. Though I'm a bit confused on what happened in the previous chapter with the astral plane and all that, I'll just move on with the one thing that I gathered from that chapter... He has magic now! And honestly, isn't that the only thing that matters? |
| A Simple Library chapter 8 . 7/3 Bruh.. i don't even understand what happened... |
| FriggleBerry chapter 1 . 6/26 This is my first Harry Potter fic on this site, I’ve avoided them for over a year now and this one seems to be good so far |
| chimmichangaa chapter 11 . 5/20 keep going. i like it |
| RDLV chapter 11 . 5/16 I'm dying to know who Harry's friend is... If it's already been said, I missed it big time. |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 9 . 5/9 Thanks for another great chapter |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 8 . 5/9 This chapter definitely brought it all together, all I can say is well done |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 7 . 5/9 Really curious to where you’re taking the story, looking forward to it |
| AvidReader2425 chapter 6 . 5/9 Holy hell, didn’t expect him to lose an arm! |
