A solid chapter here.

good chap

You have certainly spared the details. lazy writing. what colour IS Harry's eyes now? why don't you separate the scenes from each other? it's very confusing to read. you are also misspelling and missing crucial words in your sentences, so some of them I abandoned or forgo reading, because they make no sense. I'd love to read a better description of characters looks and where in the world they are. I seriously thought they were in America still, but suddenly they are in England!? when?

that makes a lot of sense

Cool chapter, love the story and hope to see what happens in future. Thanks for update and keep up awesomeness.

Ienzo, not Lenzo

Nice!

Hermoso bello muy bien

Excelente comienzo de la historia

Still quite the interesting story. Such a intriguing view of the Harry Potter universe, it is so fascinating to read. I really like where I see the story going, and reading it is still very enjoyable. Please keep up the exceptionally good writing.

Thanks so much for sharing!

Nice!

A great chapter here.

Oh no, as if things weren’t hard enough for our boy...

good chap

so voodoo magic plus ink equals possibly deadly results