Reviews for Defying Father
hatrid chapter 9 . 10/13/2018
update? please it's to good to abondon
XinterestingX chapter 9 . 8/29/2018
«That would surely make things more complicated between them than it could sometimes already be.» You don’t even know the half of it, dear Thor.
I can’t belive reading about two adults getting spanked was so... it’s hilarious, in a weird way. Oh, but if only that had been the end of it. It’s not like I don’t already know how much the truth hurt Loki. ‘Tis sad.
ShaiGar chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
Loki would say Yes, yes rather than yeah yeah. the second is not dignified enough for him.
Dino76 chapter 9 . 8/23/2018
Oh this was great! I loved that the other culprits had to watch as part of their punishment. And that Thor finally caved because he couldn't bear to see their pain :) also, I can soooooo hear Odin say "may have?" LOL
You also have me wondering about Loki's immediate future :)
Guest chapter 8 . 8/23/2018
I hope this version of Loki finding out his origins goes smoother than the movie version. (Loki is likely to need a lot of help adjusting to that.)
EmilyAnnMcGarrett-Winchester chapter 9 . 8/23/2018
Uh oh..
Dino76 chapter 8 . 8/19/2018
Now listen here. That was just mean and I hope you feel the full force of my displeasure ;) buuuut I am slightly mollified by this fluffy chapter! Love some mother/son comfort :)
I hope I didn't annoy you with my rambling ;D I wanted to leave longer reviews, but I was also impatient to read everything you've written so far! And what can I say? I have little self control ;) anyway I can't wait for more and anxiously await your next update!
Dino76 chapter 7 . 8/19/2018
Oh! OH! That is quite some humiliation Thor will have to bear. Poor boy ;) but at the same time I can't wait to read more!
Dino76 chapter 6 . 8/19/2018
Again, you go, Frigga! Love your story so far :)
Dino76 chapter 5 . 8/19/2018
Yay for Frigga and her ability to cool her husband's temper! I loved that Odin was swayed by her words and chose to talk to Loki beforehand! Oh and the feels! It was probably what Loki desperately needed to hear!
Dino76 chapter 4 . 8/19/2018
:) awesome portrayal of their very different tempers and ways of dealing with this! I love that Thor is kinda relaxed thinking that he'll surely wake once Odin gets there while Loki is fretting :D so great
Dino76 chapter 3 . 8/19/2018
Oh I just love a strong mother figure :)
Dino76 chapter 2 . 8/19/2018
Loki's inner turmoil is great! His defensiveness and sullen response every time someone "pulls rank" are perfect! And of course Frigga always the loving mother :)
Dino76 chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
A lovely start! And already 8 chapters! There goes my plan of going to bed early :D I love how you manage to capture the voice of each character!
Silvermane1 chapter 7 . 8/18/2018
Fantastic update
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