Reviews for how to be dead
Guest chapter 2 . 11/27/2018
aaannnnddddd now I'm crying even more.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
aaaannnnddddd now I'm crying. beautiful.
Iuia chapter 2 . 10/20/2018
Sad as hell! I hope to God they won't kill anyone from the orginal team 7 'cause a part of would die too (and they are not even real!)
Your writing is very, very good, very touching, very emotional.
woodendolls chapter 1 . 10/9/2018
Ughhh so heart wrenchingly beautiful! I love SasuSaku to death, and you wrote them wonderfully.
FireWater0712 chapter 2 . 10/9/2018
So heartbreaking..
I hope Sasuke doesn't die in Boruto.
something trivial chapter 2 . 9/15/2018
Your fics make me realize how emotionally invested I am in this ship. Sasuke's death is painfully sad, but I find myself tearing up over Sakura's grief. Gosh, I love SasuSaku and I love how talented the writers are.
Magnolia11 chapter 2 . 8/22/2018
It's amazing how just in a few words, I was able to feel such surge of emotions. Your writing style is brilliant and heartbreaking both at once.
Can't wait for ur next update.
Lady AlyseB630 chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
Ouch ouch ouch. My heart hurts.
Sincerely Athena chapter 2 . 8/14/2018
Oh. My heart.
Los Grotos chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
Awwww, poor girl! This was still emotional and heart wrenching as the first :,(
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
Ohmigodddddddd that last scene hurt ! Poor Sakura, poor sarada ! Grief is a complicated thing and everyone expresses it differently.
Johna chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
Very touching and sooo sad. I loved it!
Johna chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
This year I'm going to finish university and I'm here still crying after a potential death of a fictional character. 21 years old and still love team 7 and Sasuke and Sakura just as much if not even more...
You did such a great job with this! Is so short but so good. I kind of like sad stories more than sunny, happy ones... maybe that's why they are my favorites.
Ohh. How I wish Boruto to end with Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura still alive. Sasuke has already suffered too much in and Shippuden.
Thank you for this little, very sad piece of story!
Elegies for Shiva chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
I love this one just as much as the last. The ending is so both hopeful and deeply sad. I love how this piece cycles around flowers, especially with how Sakura is a girl named after them and how we often offer flowers for the dead.

I love the insinuation that even after life, Sasuke is still there with her. I looked up Plumeria too to get a better understanding of the symbolism attached to that flower, and while it varies a bit from culture to culture, I find each meaning is beautifully positive and speaks to this piece in deeply touching ways.

As always, thank you for giving us your beautiful and wonderfully crafted writing. Your ability to describe and speak to the soul through eloquent language is so inspiring, and I'm deeply grateful to have the opportunity to be reading your work
Elegies for Shiva chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
I've been a big fan of your work for some time now and I just have to say how utterly impressed I am with your ability to write short, but deeply moving pieces.

I'm unfortunately deeply obsessed with angsty pieces and works that explore grief, but I rarely see them in this soft light. We can feel the mourning sitting with Sakura, and I think this was a lifelike portrayal of one of the ways loss hits people in an irreversible way. It's not explosive, it just sits with them, ever present in a deep, yet subtle way.

The last line on this piece really gutted me too, "there would only be time, taking Haruno Sakura further away from Uchiha Sasuke."

It just makes me think of how long Sakura spent missing Sasuke in their story, and how long she's going to be missing him again. It knocked me right in the chest, I wasn't prepared for it at all. Really brilliant piece, thank you so much for writing it, and even more for sharing it 3
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