Reviews for Bad Boy Deku
Jamesbucag chapter 4 . 8/29
i kinda wanna see all girls oggle at izuku's physique
i hope its harem ish where they share him
Althea Sirius chapter 4 . 7/27
Awesome so far!
Though author notes could be in parenthesis as they are also in bold italics, scene changes need a line break or underlined italics of said place of change.
And if we're talking pairings: Setsuna, Pony, or Itsuka could be a match for Katsuki, IzuOcha for sure, and there's always ShotoMomo and DenJi ships.
And no, that ship is cute too.
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 7/27
An interesting start. I love it!
Megane-Dono chapter 4 . 6/6
Update please
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 1 . 3/19
Overall ch need to be a bit more detailed and longer with your own spice. Also some more badass moments I recommend 20CC of reading WORST and 30CC of Crows manga
AoMythology chapter 4 . 2/18
Is 'Sho' Todoroki Shouto?
bonkeydonkey chapter 1 . 2/9
The real question here is does he when his tie or does he where his uniform like bakougo?
Tony McNucklz chapter 4 . 1/27
so many flops i just don't have the will to write them all down. i can't keep this story going. you need to find a beta or take this over to DLP and get some constructive criticism on your writing skills because this chapter was actually painful several times.
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 1/27
furthermore, why is bakugou getting 2 different scores that far part? he went from 997m to 1.17km qhen supposedly he maxed out the first time? hello authorial inconsistency. and why would aizawa tie bakugo and izuku? he never would. when measurements include fractions of a point, there's going to be a difference in score, which means aizawa didn't tie their scores, the author clearly forced their desired outcome. it feels like yoou as an author are forcing outcomes and moments you want to happen into the story without thinking about whether it actually makes sense within your established character and story parameters.
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 1/27
the aizawa erasure makes no sense here. the point is to find his maximum limit without losing function. it's about maximum effect, period. control is to be exibited outside testing. izuku can use 100% in one arm then heal it, so throwing the ball should be done at maximum effort. this felt more like the author trying to force that canon plot moment to happen than an actual believable character interaction.
Gokuu the Carrot chapter 4 . 11/5/2019
You still 'round here dude?
BiG bRaIn chapter 4 . 9/3/2019
I need more plz
Ideatron chapter 4 . 7/9/2019
pleeeeaassseee be shoto
Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2019
Please continue the story
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2019
Very good! And please continue the story
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