MORE! I WANT MORE AND I WANT TO SEE THE KIDS AND THEM GO HOME!

HOW DARE YOU SHIRO!? YOU BROKE HIS HEART! ;-; I'M CRYING RN

Yey! A new update!

Yey for more!

Such a long chapter! So good, and so worth the wait!

I read this at AO3!

I still love this so much!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

hope u keep writing more keeps getting better and better. need more sklance

I love your writing! You do a fantastic job crafting characters, plot, as well as writing well. I didn’t ever think about grammar or spelling because I was completely transported. I hope you continue writing on this platform because I cannot wait to read more of your work!

Love your story! I hope that you continue to post here

This ending has left me intrigued, everything was going very well and then this, maybe the hormones went crazy to Shiro? and Lance? I'm anxious to know what's next.

I regret that the comments do not arrive as you wish in this page, the good thing is that they read to you, that counts and for that reason I ask you to continue in fanfiction. I know it's discouraging not to see a review, I know, but it would be worse if they did not even read you.

I hope you keep updating. I look forward to the next chapter. Kisses.

Omg, is it just me or is it HOT in here? Gd,that. .. that chapter was so. .. idk how too describe it, I loved every single moment! I love how you found a way to do this threesome without it being sloppy, and that ending? I have delightful chills! Please don't stop uploading, even if there's maybe two or three of us commenting i will give you paragraphs! This entire story is beautifully written and I'm sad I passed over it the first few times, but now this, this makes me pleased to have read it! I love the character development, I love the drama, the garla traits! Hell I'm not a fan usually of pidgexhunk (idk the name, hidge?punk?) But this is so sweet and so cute for them! Gah I love this story so freaking much. Usually I don't really critique stories, but the only thing I would say needs possible improvement would be... ya know what I personally can't think of anything, it's perfect! Sorry for the long comment! Hope you keep writing more! 3

I'm glad you keep updating this interesting story, I really like what happened in this chapter, as you say, Shiro and Lance should go with Keith on their own, not be forced, they should go find him. I am intrigued by what awaits those three, because I really want theirs to work, I like how the three of them look together.

I hope you keep writing. Kisses

I was glad to see you went up a new chapter, I was afraid you would stop updating. I was hoping to see just talk about Keith's galra nature, but no, they just brought the information on a tablet to Shiro and Lance, I expected to see more of that and instead spent time with Hun and Peige, but I must admit that It was something nice. The part in which both friends remembered the past and how much they lived together was nice, I thought it would not be, but I enjoyed it, and when it was coming what interested me, you let it continue! Amazing! I hope you update soon, I'm dying to know what will happen. Kisses.

Excellent history, continue write, I want know more about Keith's biology galra. kisses.

Ahhhhh i love the three of them together. Just lovely.

*fans herself*
Now that was hot!

My heart!
You write them so well :')
Keith and Lance are so good together! I love how Lance knew just what Keith needed
And the way Keith all but glomped Lance in gratitude...ahhhhhh so gooood!
Looking forward to the next chapter!