Reviews for The Carrot Dangling Approach |
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jasongd chapter 1 . 9/8/2018 Great oneshot congrats |
nuuo chapter 1 . 8/27/2018 Wait, M ratings don't cover explicit acts of this stories nature? |
catspats31 chapter 1 . 8/20/2018 While the writing quality of your story is good, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." You should remove all detailed descriptions of the physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in the story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted such as AdultFanfiction or Archive Of Our Own. |
D4rK Sid3 chapter 1 . 8/18/2018 Short but good! I loved it D4rK |
AberrantScript chapter 1 . 8/16/2018 This was delightful and funny and beautiful. BunLynn hopping around and being all shades of adorable and cute was a really wonderful thing to see. :3 It was hot, and hey... don't beat yourself up over this story. It was done for a very good cause. :3 By the way, when you see this... happy joke day. ;p |
ROYALLAPIDOT55 chapter 1 . 8/15/2018 Right as I’d read the line “girl no woman you love” the main line in the song girl that you love played hahah |
Jeff chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 *Looks back at Lincoln* Don't look at me man, you made your bed here! This was both hot and hilarious and I wouldn't be opposed to seeing a sequel fic about Lynn's Ace Savvy fantasy. |
LoudAutomata16 chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 Fucking hell, man... *damn* I mean, you know I liked it a lot from how much I was spazzing when you wrote it, but I'll say it again; this was an amazing lewd piece. Lynn and Lincoln were just perfect in it, and that last part was hilarious (thought it's not something I'm opposed to seeing). I'm definitely considering this canon in the main story. Thanks for writing this piece. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 Lynn cosplaying as bunbun was funny and sexy, very good Lynncoln. |