it’s very well-written! Please please please continue the story!

can't wait to see more! XD

Wow... That's beautifuly written, though it's difficult to read it with a vision blurred with tears...

Aww! Jack's so ADORABLE! I wonder what happens next! Looking forward to more! XD

Great story~ I love it!

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wait there's no more?
aGHGHHjHHH
you did such a great job on this, thank you for making this.
I cried and I laughed and it was just to perfect.
I feel like you got the grieving process correct as well so kudos to you
and oh little jack is just to cute
I really want him and Sophie to meet can u imagine how great that would be? they would either were everyone out with pranks or adorablenss

I love it! It’s so cool, and sweet. I am so excited for the next update! I hope that jack eventually remembers his past.

MY HEART HURTS, BUT IT'S SO CUTE! Btw, Jack's gonna have a LOT of big brothers and sisters in the Burgess kids. Jamie, in particular, I could see being VERY protective.

cute concept. Will Jack grow up slowly? Like an elfling? Or will he grow up in rapid bursts of growth? Or, perhaps, will he even grow up at all?

this is great

please continue ... I'm begging you ...

Your story is unbelievably well written, and the chapters are so long, it's amazing! I'm not normally a fan of stories depicting Jack as a small child, but yours feels very natural, it's honestly just so good! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

oh my goodness, this is so sweet I think I'm getting cavities (don't tell Tooth). I just love this!

Please continue

Oh my! Porfavor, tienes que continuar la historia, la amé desde que la publicaste y espero con ansias la continuación 3 la representación de cada guardián durante el duelo me dolió y no puedo esperar a qUe encuentren a este niño. Espero estés bien y puedas continuarla pronto.