Reviews for Spotter
Guest chapter 7 . 8/10
I love this story keep going.
orchidluv chapter 7 . 8/2
yeah!
Sashapowers chapter 7 . 7/3
Looking forward to an update! It's really good
Guest chapter 7 . 6/2
I love this story! I was hoping she'd get him in the jaw with the barbell though lol
B4bidden chapter 7 . 6/2
LMAO! omg had me in tears from laughing at the dumbbell situation. So didn't have that in my head, was thinking baseball bat or something. So can't wait to read more
Navywife07 chapter 7 . 5/28
Please update I want to know what happens next
Debbie Hicks chapter 7 . 5/25
8. Chapter 7.
Bella's pov
then suddenly both three then Exploding then glowing from within Suddenly my lips did not move Do you Remember we First me Remember What I Taught you Imzadi Can you Still sense my thoughts all all he stared in Darken Brown-Black eyes born with Vulcanoid teenaged Ocampan ears hair with bangs freshly cut but trim cropped longer flying then Blacking out with a bite guilty of your crimes the head-cord then with his with there with the best friends Attacked then too late Brought there with bitten each six then Six then was Changed then so he/they they with best friends/they both then were transitoning the with both three with they then Humanity stripped away then then the both gone attacked then then too late Delivered to Forks medical lost a lot of blood then Died there within hours then the doctor Carlisle horrified of us/they with then next then with they with him both was Punished as a Cullen with Cullens as well sliced bring them Smashed from the mark from him then Dying with him/they then too late sliced freely With immortal children aged into teenagers smashed Lost from here then then Brought there good terminated them are Dead from too much blood sharing they are Punished both with the other with theirs nuked in both bring there too late with her/pthers three good execute them with these criminals then ATOMIZED But lost from here then too late Alice who did to her/him/they Volturi moan good god I Hear a Woman's moan myself was a whole lot paler had Falkor's red eyes oh my god Bella due tof the attack you died by them you had IVF Kids with you followed are Immortal but you can't have kids that very bitter of my sterile life gasp what is it I Need animals with you guys to act human again then Smashed then too late was Not human at all then in time relearning three were gone as well the Bodies wre gone took a unneeded breath learned had no sacs were airless Alice they gone Hunting then too late Became beautiful but drop dead very Lovely more Supermodel Wore from home as all of Each both then with they as all became Eco-friend clothes wee Wild but more chic and designer clothes Alice became very sexy then Eros's arrows in our hearts then Kissed him with pure seduction had to eat Energy pulsing became a Succubus by Mating on him with clothes on gasp oh my god then where are we aboard with three with others with they then Exploding with they as all of good they are lost in there with three with as all of them more than as all of remains with time-split of us/they they as all of them were as all of to more vanished with they as all to with both they are All gone with finalist/last ones aboard to more last ones they to final ones then it nuked good Bring them here then it really happened blown as a starship nuked then it Powering up the engimes nuked freely then too late blew up then The young Vulcan female worked for NASA Saying in Vulcan Thrusted then Created a real fireball like in 2010 The Year we Make Contact was a movie then it nuked was a starcruiser myself all systems are go clear all moorings are set myself wore from the NASA Bodysuit was from the year 2379 was a Starfleet uniform too late Warped on it's shakedown cruise like in Star Trek hold on life signs very faint but I Must warn as all personnel to be careful young lady name Lieuetenant Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar what the photo of myself with the pointed ears and slanted eyebrows with two photos of Actors as Ambassador Spock and Captain Saavik Sir she is Different from us she's Vegetarian the hair is loose with a clip she is piloting very well with grace and elegance she is a priestess Momma mia she is not human she's Vulcan crap oh my god Sir! oh no he paled of muscles herd but strong Where's my mate right there crap he noticed myself very beautiful.
Kedrane chapter 7 . 5/19
Omg! Absolutely love this ! I love that Bella is strong !
Emzy2k11 chapter 7 . 5/14
Awesome chapter please update again soon I can't wait to read the next part
blackangel150 chapter 7 . 5/13
hahah so was not expecting Bella to have this streak in her damn it was fun to read. Jacob is going to get beat by Paul
cloudshadow22 chapter 7 . 5/13
Don't care much for this Jacob, but I like badass Bella.
calorraine chapter 7 . 5/13
I so wish these chapters were longer!
brankel1 chapter 7 . 5/13
Awesome.
YankeeGirlNJ chapter 7 . 5/13
Loved it!
DxGRAYxMAN chapter 7 . 5/13
Hahaha kicked his wolf arse
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