loved it! and even though the week is over, i'd love to read anything else you write on the Team in the future ;)

Admin of Team Mustang Week here. Apologies for taking so long to read this fic, I hadn't seen it on tumblr before another blog included it in their recommendations, and I'm glad they did. This is fantastic. I love the relationship you build between Jean and Riza, how he slowly gets to know her and just how captivated he is by her. My favourite part was probably when she met Breda, though; it's nice to see her more humorous side.

Personally, I'm a huge sucker for anything that gives a glimpse into how Roy recruited his team, so I loved the part at the end. Especially with how you draw parallels between Roy and Riza, and how Jean picks up on it. Thank you for contributing to the event, and what a lovely piece it was.

I love this! Wonderful characterisation. I love any "origin" story that involved Havoc and Hawkeye being friends beforehand. Great job, hope you write more about this particular period!

This was absolutely great! I love the similarities that you draw between mustang & hawkeye, as different as they might be, and the strength and goodness of Havoc, who so rarely gets an opportunity to shine :-)

This was so nice to read, a great peek in Havoc's head. I like how the relationship with Riza kind of built itself. I also love how you managed to feature also Olivier and Rebecca. And the last bit with Mustang was epic.

This is great. It's nice the friendship between Havoc and Hawkeye. It's a pleasure to read your stories.

I love this. Mustang's men are often overlooked and it's really nice to see a well fleshed out story of them.