Really curious about the premise of this story with the changes from canon. I'd love to read more if any inspiration hits for this story.

Is this gonna get updated? I really like it! And an eager to see what happens next!

I can’t wait to read more!

I was really hoping for Jon/Dany though any match you chose is fine since my other fav ship Ned/Ashara is featured here. Also love Visenya and Jamie, their secret love is sweet though rather sad because they can’t be together (T.-.T) hope everything works out between that particular pair.

Loving this story mainly Jaime and Visenya. Keep them please faithful to each other please. If Tywin dies, like now, Jaime can became Lord Lannister and Westerlands will be his.

"Somewhat betrothed"? Too funny!

Ned x ashara ftw

Jaime, you must make a very important decision, fulfill your vows and have a miserable life or make the decision to go with Visenya and your son; you are not responsible for your father's crimes. If you go to Dorne with Visenya and your son, then your father will never attack the royal family; because first your security and you will understand that Daemon is your grandson. If something always wanted Tywin Lannister is to have grandchildren who have your children, for the good of the families Targaryen and Martell you must go to Dorne; because you know your father would stop anyone who tries to hurt you even if that frustrates your own plans. Jaime, you must go now, take Ser Barristan, his place is with the Targaryen family. Ned is sincere talk to Catelyn, tell him you do not love her and that you love Ashara; It is important to be sincere more when Ashara is pregnant again. Because you can not allow this new son to be a bastard, no matter what Catelyn's father says; since they practically forced you to marry Catelyn.

Visenya you are a good woman but you need Catelyn Stark to disappear, for the sake of the plans of the conquest you need Ashara to marry Ned Stark. You need to talk about this with the Martells, they need to ensure the North's loyalty to the conquest.
Visenya, perhaps the father of your son is Jaime Lannister, if that is how you will feel when you hear the rumors of his bastard children.

so they did have a quickie

So what are the odds that Jon and Rheanyes end up together? I don't know how Nedd will feel about his nephew marrying his half sister.

Waiting desperately for the update

Great start... makes you want to read more... am intrigued now to know why the need for escape... and who these characters are :)

So no quickie

why is rhaenys queen if visenya and viserys are alive /? and how come visenya and rhaegar werent married honestly i hate lyanna and rhaegar selfish bastards