interesting story

Cool idea stupid menma cliche garb though I hate those cliche abandoned Naru with an evil brother crap

please update soon

you should add Seramis , Atalanta , Fran, Fiore , and Modred( this one would be fun to write right? she would try to steal Naruto from her father lol.) also Scatach, didn't he promised he would help her with her loneliness? why isn't she in the harem? lol she would be like one of the main one in the harem. And for the DxD girls you should do Grayfia , Serafall , Sona , Rosseweiss , Xenovia , Gabriel , Rias and maybe Grieselda Quarta? lol. Do a flashback for what happened to Naruto's birth family and for Konoha ?Kaguya should be added to his harem and maybe his former biological sister?or is she still her biological? ).

when this gonna update?

After Fate Apocrypha is DxD ? Well i hope issei still have a harem ( Rias , Asia, etc) .
Anyway Great chapter.

Great chapter!

sure about adding to the harem atalanta one of the things that can start her falling for alex is he does not laught about her wish for the grail

Nice story so far.8/10

Was it even really necassary to tell or even give Menma an harem in the first place?
You just killed my whole interest.

Christ... youre really thinking with your dick arent you?. The sheer size of the harem is all so unnecessary, added to the fact theres no male servants proves the point.
Otherwise looking forward to how it goes

Female gil huh. Interesting

sorry but this is too much and it makes me a little weird

For dxd maybe Yasaka and Kuroka because they are Youkai and they will feel better around Tamamo. I dunno keep up the great work!

I would like to see him paired with Mordred but I guess that will be weird because he is dating Artoria.