Interesting.

Nice story, lots of descriptive paragraphs... Quick request for a story: a fem Harry who comes to Hogwarts fully prepared but a twist, she loves to sing and when she does it produces a kind of illusion... Thanks for your time
~Jewel V

Cool story continue please.

To be honest I gave no clue how to say her name so I’ve just been saying Rye or Reya as I read. I’m just glade her name doesn’t start with an H. The only two girl names that start with an h that are okay are holly and hariel. I like it when fem!harry has a name that doesn’t start with an h and isn’t god awful or plain and generic. She should have a name that fits being a witch and in an noble family. So not Harriet, Jamie or marigold.

I’m guessing the dursleys memories were erased of seeing her as a girl. And that she got a new trunk and left her photo album and broom with Sirius instead of taking them with her to school. And did Sirius blood adopt her at the bank. And we just didn’t hear about it.

I love that she’s in a new house. I hope she’s not going to sleep with many people. I like that hermione, Ron and maybe Ginny aren’t her friends. Luna and the twins are cool. Maybe Neville can somehow become her friend as well.

Maybe the goblins can remove it and when the soul piece is removed she gets the knowledge from it. Or she finds out to remove it in the le fey book. Find all the pieces to be destroyed and kill voldy. Or put Tom back together and end up with him. I’m not sure who the ending couple is here. Is this a fem!harry/fleur story.

I hope she doesn’t end up with multiple people. More chapters please

I love the name Raela but if you do wish to change it why not keep it as a middle name and can't wait till the next chapter you're doing awesome also others names could names could Dahlia, Azalea, Aster, Acacia( Acacia also symbolizes immortality and resurrection) and a plus they follow the Evan's tradition of girls being named after flowers

More ! Also more spells that has spiders and snakes in it her other mother help/traning would be good also

For romance ship for Daphne,Tracey,Pansy and Blaise (now that she is female) hey she needs to repopulate elves and her house in appropriate population

My name suggestion is Lirael

Oh no! I love the name Raela. It sounds like a name for a sophisticated Lady Black. Please don't change it.

I am a bit confused about Raela's base form being a fair-skinned, black-haired and green-eyed elf, you know, being a drow, did she subconsciously shift to conform to he mental immage of what a drow looks like?

.Also, in Chapter II she returned from her trip to the Gringotts and following shopping spree being 700 galleons poorer, in the same line is mentioned that she had bought a familiar and she was bonding with it... one would think that a familiar isn't a small irrelevant detail for a mage, when are we going to see it... Also, considering Raela's heritage I would suggest a Faerie Dragon or failing that a Pseudodragon (both from D&D fame), the Faerie Dragon in particular is a tiny, talking (capable of speaking Common, Elven, Draconic and Sylvan), telepathic, sourcerous prankster with extremely high resistance to magic, making a tremendous asset to Raela, even better (if you go watch MrRhexx's "What the don't tell you about Faerie Dragons" video on YouTube) one of its favourite spells is Water Breathing, which would come handy for the second task (and both the tiny dragons would be able to use telepathy to explain the nesting dragons of the first task what is actually going on and convince the to give the golden egg to Raela without a fight).

As for being descendant of Morgana Le'Fay... does that mean that she's a daughter of house Pendragon as well? Excalibur could be an excellent melee weapon for Raela. Or maybe Morgana had an affair with Merlin and Raela is descendant of both? So many possibilities.

For the tasks Morgana gave her, well I don't know about finding her tomb but finding the portraits of the Founders might help her on that fron, after all Raela did conquer the Chamber of Secrets as Harry Potter, maybe she's his heir as well (I can see the Potters being descendants of both Salazar and Godric, maybe Rowena as well... not like that's surprising, considering how tangled the family trees are in the wizarding world you'd think it's not uncommon)... and maybe the basilisk survived being stabbed in the brain and recovered, waiting for the true heir to return to the Chamber and claim it for her own, who knows?

Great chapter, thank you very much!

I vote leaving Raela as Raela. I've seen more than enough Harriet Lilly Potters and something outside the box is simply refreshing at this point. If you do feel the need to change it I would say pick something more Elf like and less human.

I do have one big question. Maybe you intend to answer this in the edits but why was Raela's name entered into the goblet? I know I'm assuming cannon here but I can't see any way B. could know that Raela and Harry are the same person. He would still enter the name Harry Potter. Leaving the question does the name Harry Potter force Raela Black to enter or is she off the hook?

I like Raela, thought she would be more angry she isn't stupid. HP was stupid, and pretty much just went with the flow hopefully Raela will be more proactive espcially how the students will suddenly be treating her.

the title hells's princess doesn't seem to suit this story perhaps the dark elf princess of fey's blood which stick true to the story and fey being a pun on fae and fem harry being the decendent of morgana le fey. oh and I would of went with the name yami which is Japanese for darkness like hikari is light oh and is luna a light eilf.

Merge horcrux with Raela. And no changing names :)

I like Raela. It's really unique though I agree it is a little out there. I'm surprised Raela didn't react too much from getting picked though I suppose I need to reread the whole story just to re-familiarise myself with the characters. Also, I love how you portray Morgana. The job she gave Raela seems really difficult ane I can't wait to see how Raela tries to find the lost tomb and the Founders' portraits. Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.