Reviews for When Cores Colide |
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Guest chapter 18 . 6/25 To answer your question without looking up it sounds like uncle iroh form avatar last Airbender for the qoute. JerichoPhantom |
Jerichoyuy chapter 18 . 6/25 Avatar last Airbender uncle iroh words of wisdom |
crow and the butterfly chapter 18 . 6/18 where's ch 19 |
Dance-of-Pales chapter 18 . 6/10 It takes a lot to get me to break my 'silent reader' rule, but I just recently found this story, and in the...three days, I think, it took me to read it, I've become hooked. This is an amazing story, and I just needed to tell you that. Can't wait to see where you go from here. |
seraphimnight chapter 13 . 6/7 So first off, you have an amazing plot going here, a few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing greatly upsetting. The only thing i have any conflict with this story is the timeline. This is the busiest 12 hours ever and way too much happens. As a suggestion for your next story like this (don't just rewrite this story) spread it out. This story would read better if it was over days or weeks, not a morning. |
uchiha cat chapter 18 . 6/6 Yet another beautiful chapter. I love the way you portray Jazz so far as to me it’s been spot on. Keep up the amazing writing. |
devilzxknight86 chapter 18 . 6/6 Awesome update well worth the wait. Lots of information and interaction. Shock what jazz did but lol I can see woman doing that. Hope to see Sam take down a peg |
wiseguy2415 chapter 18 . 6/5 The quote came from Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, I kind of at the reference. |
Invader Johnny chapter 18 . 6/5 Heh, the day certainly went from good to better, spending the day cooking and then finally kissing Ember was good from start to finish, XD. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
EvilDannyBoy97 chapter 17 . 3/16 Would've definitely l loved to see more of this story |
Dreams Come True 996 chapter 17 . 11/3/2019 That's sweet Danny agreed to be Boxy's best man for the wedding, Its also awesome how he learned how to cook from the Lunch Lady herself. I wonder how Jazz is gonna react to the nicely0clean house and her favorite dish cooked? I'm looking forward for more, but with great patience. Good luck and see You next time! |
Mewtwo-TheLoneShadow chapter 17 . 11/2/2019 Great to see you back, daughter Dani is just too cute. |
Invader Johnny chapter 17 . 11/2/2019 Danny as the best man in the Box Ghost's wedding? That's funny but in a way, fitting since I doubt that the guy has anyone else respectable to ask. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
devilzxknight86 chapter 17 . 11/2/2019 Lol so box ghost looks like the future timeline with Dan Phantom Wondering how fright knight got an power upgrade or was this a merger or force merger Other than that awesome update can’t wait to see jazz reaction |
uchiha cat chapter 17 . 11/2/2019 Your Pham I’ll will never leave we are loyal followers of your work. |