Great stuff. I want more!

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My fav song. Sniffs

I want a footlong now...

In Scottish accent: Fokkin Good

Lmao!

RvB? Hell yeah!

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Heck yeah! This is better than Jaune's.

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So good.

Signed Cloudcartoons. Signature is there for a reason.

To make Ruby Deathstroke even more interesting should use Cinder as Green Arrow, Yang would be Billy Wintergreen. Shado is Pyrrha, Sara is Emerald, Moira as Raven. Coco as Thea. Tai would be Yao Fei.

Thought of this after.

Going to be entirely honest, I assumed this entire scene was from Batwoman the entire time, up until I read the Author's note. Haven't watched Batwoman, but the cave part gave me the impression it was from Batwoman instead of Arrow. The entire time I was picturing the characters as Batwoman and Batman, the dialogue also kinda seemed to fit. This is why I am always a big fan of people putting what it is based from at the start of the chapter. In this fanfiction it feels like we should be expected to know how to imagine the character's situation and uniforms, I even confused the red uniform at the start for Robin's. It kinda changes the meaning of the entire scene.

Didn't like Yang in this one, the headlock seemed unnecessary. I hope when alternate Ruby is hurt by alternate Yang, she at least gets some crap for it, because apparently that's what they are doing now. I know Yang didn't go too far, but it was still awkward to read. Being in a headlock is not fun, and I don't think it's much fun as a trained warrior being in a headlock either, probably quite humiliating, especially when you factor in the fact that it's Weiss in a headlock. It kinda does seem like a Yang thing to do, but then again, never liked Yang in the canon RWBY series anyways.

Saying that, the single parent joke that came immediately after was absolutely amazing.
Additionally, the Crescent Rose and Ruby having kids joke was also great.

could you do halo reach? the first mission of the game, this would be the cast:

ruby: noble 6 (obviously)

carter: clover ebi

marrow amin: emile

I came Zeki: Jun

Elm ederne: jorge

Harriet bree: kat

Basically all the operative aces as the noble team, I hope you consider it and that you can answer me if you like. great story, bye

Great chapter.

Ruby as Deathstroke. So many great scenes with that.

Awesome update :)

Cool chapter continue please.

Supergirl only has one good season, and that is season 1, then it just goes downhill