no it wasn't issei doesn't deserve a harem and we all know it you won't admit but I will issei is not main character material like midoriya that little bicth

Interesting, Interesting, just hope you don't Screw up everything to mutch

that was angsty lame at the end :/

You inhuman soulless pieces of trash. I see you real good. And I know our species is stronger than you and better than you, we're gonna beat your ass. Get that through your head.

GOD DAMN DEMONS!

P.S. I am a humble water filter salesman. Please buy my wares.

As a wise drunk Scotsman once said, “What is the martial arts response to someone throwing a bear trap at your face?”

“”If you can’t outrun the supernatural, then just bum rush it.”
*slightly crazed* That’s the fucking spirit! Charge straight at it screaming and fucking shank it!

thanks for not forgetting about us

hmm Still waiting for your OC to do something incredibly stupid. I am waiting for him to take someone else gear. Or you know have one evolve into something else. Like can you picture a Decay type of sacred gear. Something like Tomura Shigaraki's quirk but without the drawback of needing all 5 fingers to touch. Or something like All for One type of quirk gear. Can copy other gears but at the basic level until trained.

Drawback for that one is there is no conscious protecting him and capping out. Like Ddrag stops his boosting until the body can't handle anymore this one will not have that.

You could do another from another perspective, for example instead of being on Rias' side (sincerely that's very cliche and bored) you could create your own faction and defend humans, even one of your goals could be to destroy the race of the devil by the good of humanity, etc ... Another option is to make a reincarnation with a secondary character like Millicas, Kiba, or better yet Gasper!

I have read a lot of inserts and auto inserts of OC for DxD, but all OCs have really OP sacred gears and the autoinsertos are usually OC or Issei.

But there was absolutely no love for Kiba, the potential of Unlimited Blade Works, or Gasper, the damn Dhampir.

Really why!?

Gasper is a blonde effeminate vampire who can stop time.

He is Dio Brando!

There are so many possibilities!

Oh well you could reincarnate in Millicas and seek the extermination of the devil's race from within, you could even capture Valery and use the Sephiroth Graal to revive the Nekoshou and conquer the world !

Remember the best stories are those with conflicts an old gunslinger picking up his guns in order to save his kidnapped son a man who gave up the thug life to raise a family ect helps them grow because there conflict of interest figure out your angle and how you want your character to grow and you are golden brother nobody wants flat characters that go from a to b because c is the "bad" end get me goodluck

please continue it

Continue

Honestly I enjoy your stories, the only thing that I see wrong is the spelling or grammar errors. Other than that I think that you are doing fine. Keep up the great work!

I think you should continue the fic. Its fine the way it is, but if you are not satisifed with something in the story, go for it man and rewrite it to your heart's content. I find the frankness of it something to chuckle at because its something that is not really emphasized like it is in your fanfic.

Continue this story!