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I mean that was a hilarious start. But also seriously creepy! Those lemons you doled out were amazing! I quickly forgot that Draco was a stalker. Thank you for writing and sharing

Yeah...whoa. Besides the obvious (genuinely one of the very best smutty goodness fics I've ever read, EVER), I was so caught up in loving how you wrote the two of them. I loved how relatable the whole thing felt. So often there's all these crazy magical things going on in fics, understandably so, but still, it was refreshing and so enjoyable to see Hermione as a gal not dissimilar to me. As hot hot hot as it was, I really liked the story and I am intrigued and I am hoping there will more to come in this little version of the universe.

Very good, from start to finish.

I'm just going to assume that Mrs. Ren's experience was EXACTLY like this.

Oh ok... the whole time I was picturing Draco with his tattoo sleeves and I’ve found a new fucking Draco that I’m in love with.

Damn that was hot!

This is insanely hot! Whew! Need a shower, stat!

Wow! This was great! Hermione making a fool out of herself in front of Draco at a convenience store was too good. And hilarious. Looking forward for more..

Now that is a reunion!

I am so glad you’re turning this I to a multi chapter! I have to know what happens! This was so freaking amazing!

Please give us another chapter with these two! Love the concept of him being a muggle PI and her being a healer. I kind of want more to this story, you know? Like why did he choose a muggle company to work for? Do they ever see each other again? Was this a one time tryst? I certainly hope not!

Wow! I'm not huge on smut fics (unless they're Dramione. I don't know why, but it is what it is ). With that being said, this was bloody brilliant. I've always imagined that if Draco and Hermione were to get together, it would be as explosive and heated as you've made it here.
Now, hear me out... I know this was meant to be a one time good ol smutty romp inspired by a story, but is it REALLY a bad idea to continue this? No way! I mean, you have Draco working for a MUGGLE company and Mione is a healer! Imagine the possibilities. Say our dear ol' girl had to work a shift that was over twenty hours after this, and our favorite PI -needing more of his Hogwarts crush- faked an illness to see her specifically. I'm seeing the potential for some VERY intense and interesting role-play between the two... Not to mention them having to he quite so they can get away with it! "Oh my! Mr. Malfoy, you certainly have a... Hard ilness to cure. Don't worry," she whispers, "You'll come just in time." Talk about chills!
And then of course, our brilliant gal can return the favor by showing up at his PI office. He's privy to the fact that a woman thinks her boyfriend is cheating, and that's all. So, of course, when Hermione steps into the door, not only is he aroused, he's jealous because they've never really talked about significant others, but he's a PI! He should have known. Draco chews on his lip, trying to not say anything that he was thinking, and ask how he can help her.. "Well, you see, sir, my boyfriend, he hasn't called me in a week. Now, I'm a very busy, um, doctor, and I realize that he can't see me all of the time... Leave it to him to find a way, though. Last time I saw him, he showed up at my place of work just to... Well, how embarrassing!" And I could just imagine the wicked glint in her eyes as she whispered softly, "I thought I'd come, and return the favor." Then she speaks up. "He must be cheating. I haven't heard from him since." And I just don't imagine Draco being able to role-play as well as Hermione in this situation; him backing her up against the wall and kissing her and grinning from ear-to-ear because she called him her boyfriend, and I just see so much potential!
My long point is: please write another chapter! I would love you forever!
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ummm... well hell yes. get it guuuurrrllll.

So steamy! I very much enjoyed this story and the premise!