Reviews for Between Us
Xibile chapter 1 . 6h
I thought this was supposed to be soma x erina
ventusvapors chapter 11 . 8/11
I really didn't realize this is what I wanted to read while I was reading On Casual Commitments.

Like please don't misunderstand me I love On Casual Commitments because for lack a better word its very non commital (LOL) so its a nice read when I feeling I need some SouEri to read. But its very fluffy so I guess for myself I was looking for the conflict in Soma and Erina's relationship I guess a little more than surface level.

And it's here I think while reading this knowing what happens in the future adds layers, depth, and characterization I didn't quite get on my first read On Casual Commitments.

Beyond anything I apperciate what you made me realize what I like so much about SouEri. No one in world will challenge Soma or Erina like they do for each other, and while reading these chapters its something it really stuck out.

I am looking forward seeing where you take this I know it must be hard essentially writing in three parts of your timeline but I enjoy your writing very much.

I'm excited to see when Erina is trying to heal Soma right after his breakup and when the first hookup at the training camp. Nothing against the new gen (I love Raiden BTW) I just really enjoy reading these characters of the old gen just a tiny bit more.

But please keep its up once again your writing is amazing! (Also please update Before the Fall low key fav story)
Guest chapter 11 . 8/10
Yeah, megumi is a steady emotional support but erina would always be the best full package partner for him.
I'mAlsoAWe chapter 11 . 8/9
Thank you for updating! I'll be waiting for more!
ChenoaFairlee chapter 11 . 8/9
. GOOD.. PLEASE MOREEE
Roll24k chapter 11 . 8/8
Love to see this story updated! I've been loving your story about the next gen, but stories about the character we love from canon hits different. Hope for more soon!
SnowGirl098 chapter 11 . 8/8
THIS WAS PHENOMENAL! I'll be honest, I'm never the biggest fans of love triangles, and they usually put me off a story immediately. As much as I wish these all these guys would hurry up and get over themselves already, you write them in a way that's heart-wrenchingly beautiful and makes me want to keep reading. Props!
Lil Cabbage chapter 11 . 8/8
Great chapter! Please update this more often...it’s so good.
lavenderslotus chapter 11 . 8/8
YES JEALOUS HAYAMA IS EVERYTHING. Also pining Hisako!? We don’t see that too often, I love and live for it. Also, I feel like pining Soma is pretty rare too, we mostly get fed Erina’s perspective and I love it!
Guest chapter 11 . 8/8
Thank you for continuing the story.i am looking forward for more. There was toouch want and desire in the story.
audsen chapter 11 . 8/8
please update this more often fr...
lolarose2012 chapter 11 . 8/8
I love your stories! Honestly make me so happy
Guest chapter 10 . 8/6
Megumi is a steady emotional support for souma but it was always erina who inspire and push him to reach beyond his potential. Really loved to see the development of their stories ;)
Morning Songbird chapter 10 . 8/2
I love this
Guest chapter 10 . 7/26
I really want you to continue this story, as I've read on casual commitments. I want to know how they broke up as well as how Sorina started.
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