It is understandable! Your story is well written and that is rare to come by in this web site lol that surprised to be honest!

Holy shit, they deleted your story? This is ridiculous! I am sorry to hear that, it was unfair to you, especially when I had the displeasure and disgust of reading a story that had rape and no note about trigger warnings, I was fucking pissed at the author and told her so, but her disgusting rape fetish of a story is still out there and it’s unbelievable. Sorry about the rant, I was just angry on your behalf, because I know you respect the rules of the site and you have the decency to put warnings on your stories when you think some themes may bother the readers.
I love your stories.
So, about that review, when I wrote it, I was referring to the uncensored version on AO3, but please don’t take it personally, it was constructive criticism. I have a personal love for those Enji/female Izuku stories of yours; you’re one of the few writers who doesn’t equate Bakugou’s abuse to love declarations and you give a decent chance to Enji. Lots of people rule him as the worst kind of person, never daring to explore his potential for good and redeeming qualities, so thanks for that and sorry if I sounded annoying in the last review, I just wanted to help you.

I love this plot, but I must be honest, your lemons are rushed and quite dry. I was expecting more detailed foreplay, teasing, romance, more of their feelings, sweating bodies dancing, grunts and moans... I felt you were too rushed to finish and get their moment over with. I kind of expected him to fully enjoy his lover, kiss and lick every part of her skin, taste her “flower”, probe her secrets and only after driving her completely mad, would he finally take her...
On another note, it bothers me a tiny little bit when you refer to her breasts as “‘tits” or when say “cunt”. I mean, unless he’s dirty talking her as form of seduction she likes, I expected him to be more of a gentleman when referring to her womanly bits, which he seems to througly appreciate. With that in mind I kind of expected him to romance her by showering her with compliments, kisses and bites, because this time he’s enjoying their moment; there’s no rush, only surrendering and pleasure.
Anyways, I love this idea, it’s quite interesting, and the couple is fascinating. I also like the potential for goodness you’re exploring with Enji. He’s more than a fucking asshole of a father, he’s learning to be better as person, and he’s willing to improve even more for Izu, and that counts for something.

He should have gone down on her first... what the hell? Prepare her first, then go about putting his junk on her, geez...

This story is amazing. Please continue the good work.

Oh damn naughty boy! Bad Izuku! But I got to give her props for her prowess! Like damn!

Thank you so fucking much for how you portrayed Shouto in this, thank you so much for not making him mad with Izuku, she's just so smol and sweet and deserve the freaking world. Katsuki is officially on my shit list tho, I'm kinda hoping Endeavor and Izuku do like a dual punch on him and then Shouto and Inko kinda just kick him while he's down( Though others are welcome to participate as well). I'm kinda cracking about how Shouto made it some masterplan to befriend Izuku, it's awkward in a way I really adore and he's just so sneaky. BUT DAMN YOU CAN REALLY PORTRAY ENDEAVOR IN PAIN, it's really awesome but I kinda hate it to because I've come to love your version of himm so much. I love you I love your writing and you are incredible my dear at what you do. Thank you so much for your hard work and I hope you have a great day and that luck walks your way!

Poor Izuku having to suffer through Bakugo words. Words hurt more than anything.

That little manipulator. When Izuku gave Shōto that look, she caught on right?

Enji, surrender. You can not get it out of your head xD I like the part about Fuyumi keeping some kind of resentment towards her mother (maybe because she is older and has seen more than Shoto or Natsuo saw) P.S:. I loved the talk of Enji and Rei, it would never have happened that Rei could have some personality disorder

Honestly I can see Rei and Enji managing a open marriage on both side. Married to each other on paper but in practice are just good friends who have kids together but are with other people. At least for the most part unless they can find a way to divorce without it harming either parties.

This was definitely different. Does Japan not have a minor age of consent thing? Even her mother seemed okay with it. Maybe it's something to so with the 150yrs in the future?

I'm so hecking enraptured in this story. I wish I could make an account on AO3 but they won't send me an email for signing up lol. I'll resign to stick around here, unless you only update there. In that case, I'll be sure to figure out AO3 eventually here.

Duuuuude, you don't hecking disappoint! I'm so glad to be reading your other work now, thanks for letting me know! :D

Wow this was intense like damn! If their relationship gets better would she move in back with them?