Reviews for Voltron Wizards to Paladins
nliochristou chapter 5 . 7/20
Question: when will we see Lucas the charecter that repleces Shiro(when he was a Galra prisoner) in your story and role will he have; Also will Cedric dissapear by the end of s2 events; if so how the Galra make a clone like for Shiro in canon to go undercover, i mean did Haggar collect some dna when they had their fight on Zarkon's ship;
jetslinger333 chapter 23 . 7/19
I don’t like how the black lion spoils everything to Cedric it should be kept a secret.
Mastermind4892 chapter 1 . 7/3
Who are Kensuke, Rei and Shinji?

You've mentioned those names in place of certain characters a number of times in this first chapter.
nliochristou chapter 21 . 6/2
updated please it's been months since your last updated in this story
Anon chapter 21 . 5/29
Can the mall chapter have Harry and Alura go on a date, or Harry work a shift at vrepit sal’s to get Alura a gift
merendinoemiliano chapter 21 . 1/1
Pretty interesting story, can't wait for more. Happy new year.
White lion chapter 19 . 12/14/2019
I like this story and seeing something new but what doubt me is that relationship between Harry and Allura is kinda to fast paced in the story. I thought would be during season 3 of 4 their relationship starts. This feels like more force just to create a scene story but still a good story.
Arrta Myrdhyn chapter 1 . 12/11/2019
Just finished Chapter 1 and about to start 2.. But I got a comment first.
There are a couple of times where you get Harry and Ron's names wrong. I have read Shinji used for Harry a few times and once used Kensuke for Hermione. Its almost like you started writing a Neon Genesis Evangelion crossover, then decided to change course and write is as a Harry Potter one.
Not sure if this mistake is going to continue in Chapter 2 or not, but it distracts from the story when suddenly you see a random name/character appear when it shouldn't be there at all.
Wait, I figured it out.. you are plagiarizing your own story, Genesis Defender Voltron... You are using some of the exact same sections in mutliple stories and changing their names...

"Kensuke in the Green Lion barely dodged a flurry of lasers. "This is insane! Can't they just cease firing for one minute so we can figure this out? Is that too much to ask?!" Kensuke shouted right before turning around a leaping towards two gliders that closer to the ground. Jumping up, the Green Lion caught one of them in his mouth by the wing before throwing it into the other."

Hermione in the Green Lion barely dodged a flurry of lasers. "This is insane! Can't they just cease firing for one minute so we can figure this out? Is that too much to ask?!" Kensuke shouted right before turning around a leaping towards two gliders that closer to the ground. Jumping up, the Green Lion caught one of them in his mouth by the wing before throwing it into the other.
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 19 . 12/10/2019
Holy...crap...
That was AWESOME!

My favorite part was the fight between Harry and Salazar
So freaking cool!
54godamora chapter 20 . 11/26/2019
huh. nice interlude chapter. this should tide the fans over until the next huge chapter.
Jose19 chapter 18 . 11/25/2019
I am actually quite angry at the ending of the new Voltron series because they killed off Allura, and they ruined the series doing this.

I would say in general that the old Voltron series is far superior to this new one.
54godamora chapter 19 . 11/25/2019
wow. we go from something that's almost M-rated to fighting a robeast.
fireclaw239 chapter 1 . 11/3/2019
another problem is that, so far, you seem to mostly be just copying directly from the Netflix Voltron series
fireclaw239 chapter 1 . 11/3/2019
first of all, Cedric was never, in the books or in the movies, down to be a leader. the way they should've been allotted was, Harry in the black lion, Cedric in the yellow lion, and Ron in the red lion.
samoht chapter 18 . 11/2/2019
Hi, I love your Crossover and I have some ideas for the future.

Harry is a triple-blood, which means that in addition to the blood of his mother Lily and his father James there is Krolia blood (his surrogate mother). Lily being sterile, Krolia volunteered to be the surrogate mother. by a mixture of earthly magic and extraterrestrial technology, Krolia received the Lily blood in her.
For Harry, having two mums is a big revelation, especially since Krolia feels the same maternal love for Harry.

Salazar had a brief connection with Voldemort, intrigued Salazar informed Zarkon and asked if he could go to Earth with some druids and soldiers to make him an ally of the empire.

Intrigued and curious by this connection, Haggar proposed to the emperor to accompany Salazar.
Zarkon accepted his request.

Salazar and Voldemort finally meet, early Voldemort was tempted to kill his avatar Galra and the witch. But very quickly he thought of the many knowledge and spells that Haggar and these druids possess.

The idea of having these new powers, Oooh yes, neither Harry Potter, nor Albus and his order of the Phoenix, no one will be able to stand across his path.
The Lord of Darkness accepted, but he needed to recover his power, he explained what he needed, the bones of his father, the pulpit of the devoted servant (Peter Pettigrew) and the blood of his enemy Harry Potter.

On hearing this name, Haggar remembers the Red Lion's Paladdin, and she described Paladdin's face to Voldemort.
Voldemort told Witch Galra that he saw it through the boy's eyes as she pulled her soul fragment out of Harry's body. he replied that Potter's blood is indispensable for him to have a body so that Lily's protection no longer has any effect on him.
Haggar replied that she has a sample of Harry's blood on her.
With this revelation, Voldemort laughed and ordered Peter to quickly prepare the cauldron for the ritual.
intrigued, Haggar offered his help for the ritual.

(Cemetery)
During the ritual:

Peter put Voldemort in the cauldron.

a soldier Galra opened the tomb of Tom Riddle (Voldemort's father) and the druids removed the bones of the deceased and placed them in the cauldron.
"Let the bones of the father, given in all ignorance, bring his son back to life," said one of the druids.

Wormtail and Salazar advanced toward the cauldron, shaking Wormtail stretched his hand above the cauldron.
a red glow appeared in Salazar's eyes and a demonic smirk appeared on his face.
In a flash his sword cut not the hand of Wormtail, but the whole arm of it and fell on the ground near the cauldron. Wormtail fell to the ground with pain and tried to stop the blood escaping from his stump.
Salazar picked up the sliced arm.
"Let the flesh of the servant given willingly, revive his master!" exclaimed Salazar, putting it in the cauldron.

Some druids went to Peter, giving him first aid.

And finally Haggar came out a little vial containing Harry's blood.
"Let the blood of his enemy, taken by force, revive the one who fights him." says Haggar, pouring the contents into the cauldron.

Returning to life, Voldemort was dressed by a druid Galra, then he went to Peter and ordered him to present his arm.
Peter held out his remaining arm still attached to his body thinking that his master was going to push him away.
But Voldemort replied, "The other arm, Wormtail!"

He reached out his other arm and saw the tattoo that Peter was wearing on his forearm. Voldemort explained to Haggar that this is his mark "the mark of darkness".
He put his finger down and suddenly silhouettes appeared surprising the Galras. Voldemort presented his faithful Death Eaters to Haggar and his troops.

Voldemort exclaimed that he is very disappointed that none of them tried to find him.
One of the Death Eaters went down on his knees before Voldemort begging for forgiveness.

Voldemort asked for his wand, Haggar handed it to him, and then Voldemort cast the torture spell on the Death Eater to show that he did not forgive the cowards.

He turned to Wormtail then he pointed his wand at the ship and out of the robotic prosthetic pieces and headed toward them.
The pieces came together and replaced Peter's missing arm.
Salazar proposed to celebrate the resurrection of Voldemort by the massacre of all the inhabitants of the village of Little Hangleton.

Voldemort first wanted to free the other Death Eaters that were sent to Azkabam.

Salazar reassured him that they will have released his most faithful Death Eaters long before the members of the Ministry of Magic arrive on this burning village and do not understand what happened.

A demented smile appeared on Voldemort's face.

(a few minutes later)
When the aurors arrived on the scene, they saw the scene with horror.
The village of Little Hangleton destroyed. the dead bodies of the inhabitants of the village lying, some burned by fires, others bodies sliced by a blade, and other unhurt with an expression of stupor on their faces (the spell of death). And above the village, shining with a thousand lights and visible for miles around, The mark of darkness sparkled in all its horror.

I hope you enjoy my ideas.
P.S. I use Google translation, so do not begrudge me for sentence errors.
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