Reviews for Dragon of the Hearth
you shall not know my name chapter 5 . 4/30
Wait... how did Zeref know Natsu's name? Igneel named Natsu and Hestia didn't know Natsu's name when she spoke to Zeref.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
How you continue you star wars the force unleashed fanfiction The Unexpected
cg037 chapter 5 . 1/9/2019
A great story so far, keep up the good work.
AtlasofBeacon3 chapter 5 . 11/30/2018
Go kill yourself asshole. Scumbags like you give a bad name to anime fans everywhere. You go around insulting people in the review section. Yet your fanfics are complete and total garbage. Do everyone and take down this piece of trash you call a story.
hawkeyestratos1996 chapter 4 . 10/31/2018
amazing story question whens the next chapter?
Schillerwild999 chapter 4 . 9/23/2018
just need Hestia know Acnologia and feel very terrified by the cataclysmic power that he has, even she could think that Acnalogia could smash Cronos
ultima-owner chapter 4 . 9/22/2018
Her reaction makes perfect sense.
Elysiis chapter 1 . 9/19/2018
will there be Percy? Please?
ultima-owner chapter 3 . 9/18/2018
a handful of chapters before the good stuff is ok with me.
Dragneel Vanquisher chapter 2 . 8/31/2018
Amazing Chapter hope you update soon
treyalexander63917 chapter 2 . 8/30/2018
I think he should still become the black wizard. Just because Natsu wasn't born doesn't mean the dragon's won't attack his village and what would stop Zeref from trying to revive his parents instead. He would still become cursed and he would still create the Demons of Tartaros to kill him. As for E.N.D, what about Eileen/Irene? What better candidate for the strongest demon than the first Dragon Slayer. Also, don't try to use her being a part of Alvarez and her wanting to steal her daughter's body as an excuse why that wouldn't work. Both plotlines were a mess and he could easily trick her into doing it by promising that he can make her feel by turning her into a Demon.
REiNozomi chapter 2 . 8/30/2018
good
REiNozomi chapter 1 . 8/30/2018
infamous of coz
Matty G91 chapter 2 . 8/29/2018
I have an idea you could use. Sometime after leaving Natsu in the woods and getting his wife pregnant Brenton tearfully confesses his crimes of cheating on his wife and his plot to kill his illegitimate son, by leaving him in the woods, after his wife names their new son Natsu. Zeref overheard his father’s confessions and is shocked that he had another brother. Later on after the dragon attack Zeref makes Natsu #2 E.N.D and meets Natsu #1 and gives him the Dragneel name.

By the way nice going with 2 chapters in one day!
natza chapter 1 . 8/29/2018
I say the infamous Black Wizard Zeref. Also great chapter!
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