Reviews for Seals are Easy, People are Hard |
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avidnarutofan chapter 20 . 2h This is an absolutely brilliant story. Aside from some errors, it is fantastic! I love the characters and their mannerisms. It is truly a joy to read. You have also added more depth to them which is rare to find. I love the humor and Naruto's bluntness. It is thoroughly entertaining. I can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers. |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/28 Absolutely love the direction this has taken. For once, a story that doesn't force canon events to happen. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/26 Haha you're right! Nobody really cares about Kankuro, poor guy |
Victor chapter 20 . 7/26 awesome chapter |
dariofort chapter 7 . 7/27 i have and IQ of 42069 and I understand you fanfiction and his intriguing and extremely profound subtext, obviously only people like can get all the jokes |
dariofort chapter 4 . 7/27 I like a lot how you manage to make angst funny |
Nikkless chapter 20 . 7/26 more please and i really hope that Kurama will show up soon |
T6a5n6k8 chapter 5 . 7/25 naruto: vibe check *destroys you at the atomic level due yo 1500 seals he had set up in the 2 hours he waited for you to appear* |
Simianpower chapter 1 . 7/25 Reviews said that this was "publishable quality", but I don't see it. It starts out in Naruto's head, and yet four paragraphs later it jumps to the thoughts of a shopkeeper, and then right back to Naruto. That's not third-person omniscient; it's third-person limited done wrong because it's jumping from one character's head to another's at random. That appears to continue throughout the chapter. As that's a style that drives me absolutely up a wall, I'll stop reading here. |
T6a5n6k8 chapter 4 . 7/25 fuck off nerd, lmao -danzo, probably, |
Nikkless chapter 6 . 7/25 hope to see Kurama soon |
Nikkless chapter 3 . 7/25 hope that Naruto offers the same thing to Tsunade as he offerd to the other girls |
Nikkless chapter 2 . 7/25 hope gets the Uzumakis Adamantine sealing chains |
Nikkless chapter 1 . 7/25 hope there will be romance. even a small harem. like Hinata,Temari, Samui,Tenten. Atleast Hinata |
oneshield chapter 16 . 7/25 This chapter made laught so much. And the serious part was just as good. |