You are so wonderful at crafting the words to put the reader in a particular moment and making them feel as if they are embodying the character. I really enjoyed this.

What a wonderful little story. Loved it. Keep writing.

Hi Lemon, I loved this! 501 perfectly arranged words. Charlie and Bass are real people, I can see the dust in that room, almost smell it, can see the sunlight making Bass’ eyes gleam. I can feel how Charlie’s feelings for Bass are changing, can’t wait for more of this road trip... :D Magpie

Very nice! I'm intrigued...what are these dreams and will we find out what they are? Also will there be another chapter?