| Reviews for Hallow Souls |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 5/23 Awesome story |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/23 Kisuke could also learn a few things about raising children... he sucks as badly as Isshin. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23 Isshin is a shitty father. End of story. |
 Wolcen chapter 6 . 4/3 You can skip to the part where Byakura come in. Maybe bring in uryu first. Like Uryu thinks Allen is a soul reaper or a hollow (maybe he saw the Neah transformation) its pretty suspicious because he has hollow like eyes. I dont think that you can have Byakura kill Allen like he does Ichigo in the show (say what you want but severing a chain of fate kills people, even if he didnt stay dead). So all that will be a trip. |
| Wolcen chapter 4 . 4/3 I believe in the manga he ended up passing out after defeating the hollow, so when he 'woke up' in the morning he took a minute to process and then went straight to his the living room to see if it really did happen. (In case no one answered this question of yours yet.) |
| XXX Chaos Breaker XXX chapter 6 . 3/23 I really wish their was more dgray man fanfiction like this because Allen Walker is a great character and have a amazing power set |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/3 There are lots of episodes to explore until you get to Soul Society. You could work on Allen exploring more of this world with his loved ones, Clown and Nea. They could plan what to do with their lives, away from Shinigami crap. He’d take his sisters away and find a way to live in peace, or so he dreams. I am curious to read what Kisuke thinks of Ichigo. He’s a good kid that deserves love, family, friends and happiness. After that shitty life of his, he’s earned a good reincarnation. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/3 Please update, this is awesome |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/3 Isshin is still a shitty and irresponsible father who abandoned his kids because his wife died. Cry me a fucking river, old man. You don’t get to shirk on your duty as a father just because of a tragedy. It was so wrong for Allen, at 8years old, to fill the role of a responsible adult... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/3 Isshin is a shitty father to Ichigo, isn’t he? |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 6 . 3/2 I like it |
| Carol542 chapter 6 . 3/2 Love it |
| Mukuro234 chapter 6 . 3/2 This was good. |
| ThisIsMyLife9752 chapter 6 . 3/1 Fabulous story so far. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. If you really feel you need to Maybe a time skip to get to what you want to write? |
| Argonaut986 chapter 6 . 3/1 Talk about deviations from canon. Quite the amusing takedown of Kanonji. |
