this is awesome! great work!

nice

good story

Fantastic plot twist. Did not see that coming!

Great twist! Thanks so much

Was sceptical at first, but I completely loved it!

That was brilliant. I love draconian Bones, passing judgement on those horrificly guilty in the torture of a child. Absolutely divine.

wonderful!

Harsh!

Wow! That was really good! Okay, I'm a Harmonian, so the Harmonious Happy End gets my approval.

But the really evil people finally get really evil punishments.

In my opinion the Hogwarts staff is out of place at that school. Two teachers don't get bad grades from me, because except their subject I know exactly nothing about them, they're not Harry's teachers, and they seem to have absolutely no power to do something about the so-called school. It's Septima Vector and Bathsheda Babbling. In addition to that Irma Pince is not pleasant to be around, but there's a reason that librarian is a job that requires formal training. She's alone, has incredibly long hours and homework mostly includes literature research, so almost everyone crowds her bookshelves and work tables. She's hopelessly overworked.

All other staff should be either fired, incarcerated or executed.

Every single Death Eater that went back to Riddle in 1995 was there of their own free will. None of them WANTED to be redeemed. So, execution is the best for those psychopaths.

Dumbledore was the co-creator of Grindelwald the Terrible, he was the sole creator of Lord Voldemort (Honestly, seemingly incinerating every single one of an orphan's possessions? Riddle was shown with that that Dombledore thought him absolutely worthless and undeserving of personal property. AND that he had NO power, that Dumbledore could do everything to him just because he wanted to.) and he was the sole creator (although a lot of his minions did the actual work) of Harry Potter's suffering.

Conspiracy nutters started to hate Dumbledore after the fourth book at the latest, when his eyes twinkled at hearing that Harry's blood was involved. In the fifth book he admitted that he wanted Harry tortured at the Dursleys, and in the seventh book he admitted to Snape that he raised Harry with the sole aim of Harry being so downtrodden that he'd be going willingly to his death at exactly the right time for Dumbledore's plans.

Snape - He's a monster, and it's not even known what he did during his time as a Death Eater before he "turned to the light". How many children he raped to death and such. There are sick animals out there who are huge fans of convicted mass murderers and such in real life. But I think everyone else who likes Snape utterly confuses hateable Severus Snape and the (sadly) late charismatic Alan Rickman.

The rest of the Order of the Phoenix willingly, and knowingly, helped a senile sociopath torturing a child. They must have seen how Harry was treated. And complete isolation? Anyone, even hardened soldiers after their war deployment get psychological support.

So, that a lot of the baddies finally are taken off the streets permanently should be a lot more widespread in fanfics. Very well done!

Oh, and with both Crouches, who'd be familiar with the plot, dead at that time and the rest of magical Britain being idiots no one would EVER suspect the truth. Hehe.

I was hoping for this ending. Thank you.

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I greatly appreciated this one shot - Harry was treated horridly throughout the series, and was repeatedly failed by those who professed to have his best interests at heart. A tale where he is able to escape the abuse and abusers? And further they are punished for their cruelities?

Most excellent.

I was not expecting that! I almost didn't read to the end, but I'm glad I did.

Hard to read in some parts but I am glad I was right about Harry being alive. Only thong I mossed was Hermione bing in the know as well. Excellent story, left me smiling.

This was excellently written. Brutal but well worth reading.