plot twist: sebastian's actually an alien

like seriously, he seems too 'solid' to be called demon when he's in his true form XD

Great story, I can’t wait to see what you write next.

Really good. I love your use of words here, but it was kind if hard to understand, especially when you over describe things.

Mhmmmm so lovely! Thank you for the much needed and much loved smut of a very amazing and loved description of actual demon Sebastian! I really love reading about him in his demon form and i especially love his demon form being used to take Ciel in every way! ;) Will you continue with more smut and make a smutty story? That would be amazing, i love how you write and how you wrote the sex scene! I could definitely read more of that! ;P One point of improvement, you could add even more description for the sex and draw it out and make it really long and hard and oh so super sexy! ;D I am a huge SebaCiel perverted Smut fan! Thank you for this though, even if you do not continue, i enjoyed reading this very much! :P xxx

Loved it. Your writing is sooo amazing and the way you portray the characters is perfect. Keep on keeping on.