Reviews for The Girl Upstairs
Multifandom464 chapter 13 . 7/12
Hope you okay please come back and finish this
AnnaM87 chapter 13 . 6/27
I hope Brandon eases up towards the twins and I'm desperate for more Callie and Stef bits
Please update again soon x
Cal59 chapter 13 . 6/21
I can't wait to see the conversation between Stef and Callie :)
Guest chapter 13 . 6/10
I feel Jesus and Mariana take bring being adopted for granted since B was okay with it and I wonder what if he wasn't and they understand where he is coming from and I feel the mom's put B's feelings on the back burner but Jesus and Mariana do so dumb stuff and use being adopted from the system as a crutch and it gets kind of old.
scorpun chapter 13 . 6/6
Finally, Lena got Stef to understand how Brandon was feeling towards Jesus and Mariana. Slowly over time his anger will lesson towards them.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/6
Can you write something where all the kids heard B call them strays instead of just Jude. I feel they need to confront him and he needs to tell why. I understood why and I feel the moms made him out to be the had guy but spared AJ's feelings over his when they let him out to dry. If you can't treat your kids the same don't adopt. Or can you write where the moms asked B if it was okay to make Jesus and Mariana part of the family and he says no since his best friend Callie and her brother Jude are in the foster care system and she is Stef's goddaughter?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5
I like your stories. Maybe you can write one were Lena adopts Callie as a four or five year old since she was put in the system ay birth by her birth parents since they were expecting twins. A couple of years later, Stef and Lena meet and the truth is out and Callie is hurt and upset what her birth parents did by keeping one child and getting rid of another. Or one where the moms take in Callie when she is sixteen and they have B as well as bio siblings Jesus, Mariana and Jude but Stef and Mike placed Callie in the system at a year old since they could not raise her. Callie is hurt especially since her mom took in three foster kids and adopted them when she was in the system for years and abused and she had to come to terms with what her parents did. Or Lena is Callie's bio daughter with Robert Quinn and he left her pregnant and Lena gave her up to the system since she was pressured by her parents to give her up since Lena was sixteen but years later Lena picks her up at Juvie and realizes it is her daughter she gave up and Callie meets the family and the kids are nice to her but Mariana is hurt when she finds out Callie is her mama's bio daughter. Well if you can. You are my favorite writer on this. Or Lena finds out the twins she thought were stillborn are very much alive and that her mama forged her signature and they were in the system and she brings them home. Her twins are B and Callie and they have to learn to be a family first and Lena decides her and Stef can't take in Jesus and Mariana as planned since B and Callie were discovered. Or one were Stef and Lena are married. B and Callie are Lena's bio twins with Robert Quinn and Jude is Stef and Mike's bio son and the kids are five and three when the moms get together and years later they take in Jesus, Mariana and Isabella when they are fifteen and fourteen. But they need to make the three foster kids feel at home. B and Callie look more like Robert than Lena.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/4
can't wait for the Callie talk.
Tialaila chapter 13 . 6/4
I hope you continue this. It's really good.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/28
Well done to Lena for getting through to Stef. Now for Stef to get through to Callie?
Guest chapter 13 . 5/28
But if they never went behind their backs at all she never would have been shot.
WaitingForLightning chapter 13 . 5/28
Love this chapter!
Guest chapter 13 . 5/27
So glad you’re continuing this, I love it!
goddragonking chapter 13 . 5/27
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:
Guest chapter 13 . 5/27
Glad Lena made Stef see Brandon’s point of view. It’s true they’d have been mad as hell if the twins had done the same thing minus Stef getting shot. Always thought they were too easy especially on Marianna at times. Perfectly written. Xx
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