Reviews for lie a little better
Ryan Mashall chapter 7 . 4/1/2019
Nononono tht cant b it
Ryan Mashall chapter 5 . 4/1/2019
Oh shoto, ur so thickheaded
Ryan Mashall chapter 3 . 4/1/2019
Noo don’t misunderstand tht quickly!
Ryan Mashall chapter 2 . 4/1/2019
Well shoto is right, it isnt tht easy
Ryan Mashall chapter 1 . 4/1/2019
Cute bt also im intrested
cassy1994 chapter 7 . 11/21/2018
This was really interesting.
Saltwater Romance chapter 6 . 9/30/2018
Haha. Little do you know my poor sweet Todoroki, you have met All Might—several times now!

This line: ‘Midoriya would have laugh lines when he was old, right? Todoroki supposed he’s probably never know.’ That was so heartbreakingly sweet, my friend! Beautifully written! It was bittersweet and packed a huge punch! I think this has to be one of the greatest, most powerful lines ever written in the history of literature. My heart broke into a billion tiny little pieces. Why is Todoroki so sweet and lovable yet so pigheaded and irritating at the same time! I just want to shake him! Like just love Midoriya, you fool! Stop holding back! Y’all are soulmates!

Wait, and Midoriya isn’t going to fight for the love of his life?! Huh? But he’s fighting villains on the daily! :( That is so sad. I understand what you did; it was portrayed realistically and true to character (thanks for that!). But it’s so sad to watch (err… read!).

Wait. LOL! The fact that Todoroki is offering to help a villain press charges against his father is priceless! I love it! But wait, it’s also very sad… I’m conflicted on whether to be elated or depressed because of all that happened to drive Todoroki to that point. Oh well, as always, you did a flawless job with this chapter! You keep me so so so happy! I look forward to your updates!

Oh man, and this cliffhanger! I love it! So Todoroki finally sees why Midoriya keeps disappearing, huh? I can’t wait to see him process his emotions—if he does.

But moving on! This chapter! It had me in my feels the entire time! I love how you deviated from the usual humor and still packed a huge emotional punch! You’re doing such a great job, and I can’t wait for the chapters to come :) Thank you for updating! You are the highlight of my day, as always
Eriq chapter 5 . 9/23/2018
I loved this story I’m hooked
Saltwater Romance chapter 5 . 9/23/2018
Lol, how smooth is Shinsou? I love it! But... The real question is: was the pitbull campaign the default agreed upon 'special project' or is Shinsou that great at lying?! Even if Todoroki knew everyone wasn't telling the truth, it is beautiful how Shinsou didn't even miss a step. :') I feel like a proud mama hen! And still, I love how the special project thinly veils their vigilante activities!

And those dogs with American states names! Very nice touch!

Can we just take a moment and appreciate Bakugou and Uraraka's conversation? "He went to a word school!" I can practically hear him sounding like he's mad and frothing at the mouth with juuuust a hint of being horrified! LOL! Sounds like Bakugou hasn't had any good experiences with lawyers! But then again, the special skill of a lawyer is twisting words to fit their needs! Bakugou definitely is valid to be scared of Todoroki! Haha! Especially since he's so straight-forwarded and doesn't have a filter; he could say the wrong thing by accident! And I love how he went to Uraraka for help! So cute! And hands down the highlight of this chapter!

Todoroki is such a paranoid person! Lol! Midoriya? String of lovers? Illegal drug ring?! Pfffttttttt. Our favorite icy-hot definitely has a wild imagination! But it's cute!

But dang, disarming yet dangerous is right! Because THREE espresso shots?! Eeeeeeshhhhh! That's a lot! I'm surprised her little heart hasn't exploded from all that caffeine! Thank you for their conversation because it gave a lot of valuable insight in how both Midoriya and Uraraka think! I'm looking forward to Todoroki confronting Midoriya! It'll be epic!

And if you find yourself in a creative writing block, may I suggest a snippet of Shinsou and Bakugou discussing (or freaking out about) what just happened after Uraraka and Todoroki leave the animal shelter? We've seen everything at the viewpoint of Todoroki, so it would be interesting to see what's been happening behind the scenes! I'm pretty sure Bakugou will be the funniest character in this story lol! He definitely has the funniest lines because he doesn't hold anything back! It would be a great bonus scene if anything! Or a whole chapter! Haha!

But as always, I enjoyed this chapter so much! I squealed when I saw that you updated! I'll continue to support you on your journey to completing this story! :)
Whatisthiswitchery chapter 5 . 9/23/2018
I can’t wait for more! I love this story so much. It’s such a fun idea for such heavy topic matter. You’re doing wonderful!
Saltwater Romance chapter 4 . 9/21/2018
Honestly, I can't believe that this masterpiece doesn't have more reviews- I realize that many people have favorited and followed this story, but you definitely deserve more feedback. I love literally everything about it. I didn't even want to read the last couple of lines of this story because I didn't want it to end so soon without promise of another update!

First off, I think your AU is set up beautifully because I can definitely see Todoroki being an anti-hero lawyer if it came down to it, and I can definitely see that group banding together to amend the laws regarding the ban on heroes! I love that Midoriya and co are using an animal shelter as a front for their vigilante work! I literally laughed out loud! It's so sweet and believable (but only for Midoriya because he's so compassionate) and I CAN'T BELIEVE AN ANIMAL SHELTER IS BEING USED TO COVER UP WHAT THEY ARE DOING! Haha! Honestly, that is such an awesome and unique concept. I love it! And that little bit of Aizawa sleeping on the job and not even caring? Gold. Literal gold.

Wait, can I mention that your author's note on the second chapter made me laugh so loud! "Now it's time to break Todoroki's heart :(" Sorry, I laughed. So. Hard. I love your sense of humor. I love how succinct your writing is and how each word adds to the hilarity and the drama of what's happening! Your writing style is so unique and fresh, and I love it! I feel so giddy like a kid on Christmas reading your chapters!

So can we just stop and appreciate the fact that Todoroki and Midoriya are fighting for two different things? Like hello Mr. and Mrs. Smith: the funny version! But I wouldn't mind some epic showdown as well. I am so eager to see how Todoroki will act once he finds out! I also want to know what egged Midoriya to wanting to meet him in the first place! I hope you discuss that further, or will write to me and spoil it for me ;)

Wait, and can we talk about Bakugou and Todoroki meeting for the first time?! A special project about pit bulls? Pffffft. But I love that you incorporated a very serious real life subject and made it parallel the situation on hand. Love it. A work. And what about that little quip, "Midoriya's bawling his eyes out and our office's not insured against water damage." L O L! And what about Todoroki's tongue in cheek commentary on Bakugou's attire. Priceless! I had to reread their interaction again and again because I loved it so much. Especially with that little detail about the boiled egg.

Oh, and of course, I can't leave a review without mentioning how sweet the friendship between Todoroki and Momo is.

I love that little misunderstanding about "needing booty at 4 AM" and how you were able to write about Todoroki knowing that Bakugou was lying without shoving the fact that he's a freaking lawyer down our throats! I love you subtly mentioned Bakugou's nonverbal ticks and how Todoroki knew because... Duh! Lawyer! This is what he does for a living!

Oh wait! What about the dynamic without All Might and Bakugou? I can definitely see Bakugou only being able to cook spicy foods, but making a small exception for the health of Yagi :') I love each detail that you incorporated, and I wanted to let you know that I appreciated and cherished each one. It really made your story unique.

I hope you continue your story because I really want to be able to read it until the very last word that you write. The storyline is engaging like you can't even believe! Your writing style packs a punch! Your humor is 15/10! I love it. I hope continue to find the inspiration to continue this story.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2018
Ah this is sweet. You deserve more follows. Looking forward to the next chapter
Whatisthiswitchery chapter 4 . 9/11/2018
I like where this story is going so far! I look forward to your next chapter!