wonderful chapter hope you keep it up and poor sans loseing frisk he going to go crazy

cool

wonderful hope you keep it up

I'm really excited to see where this story goes! good writing!

I love it and I can’t wait for more chapters

Is this thing on or do I need to login? Either way you slice it I’d say you’re doing good so far Red. If I had to say, maybe give it an ol’ grammar check. Maybe also later on try including some slang. Like how you had the two dreemurrs killed on a vacation. Go into detail with that when you can. Now, uh, night! ~C