Hey not to be offensive or anything but it is Hawk moth and there are a lot of spelling errors. It started off well but the story felt rushed but good overall concept. I think this could be an amazing story with some corrections overall good :)

Can u do another chapter I love this is it so good keep writing. do what u love

I wanted to say that there was still hope because Marinette hadn't told HackMoth she was Ladybug and that you have a nice week.