wow it's amazing hhahaha you gonna have to write this next. You can't end up like this

Loved this. Pretty good!

I like how you wrote this.

Even though I'm a more fan of Charles/Eric, I don't mind the Eric/Mystique relationship.

I'm so happy you wrote another Raven/Charles/Erik fic! Your writing is amazing and this is a very interesting oneshot. I'd easily like to read a multi-chapter based on this. The banter between Raven and Erik is delicious! I could hear it in Erik's voice and it was soooooo sexy ahahahah. Loved this!

Love it!

Excellent! Love the dialogue and everyone's character is spot on

I think it portrays a kind of test. I love how Magneto just picked her apart. He wanted no hesitation and no backing out and no 2nd thoughts. This was absolutely perfect. Thank you for sharing!

I see you reuploaded your story. Probably a good idea after what you said in your A/N. Anyway, great fic! Short but very bittersweet.