Reviews for Naruto in the West |
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Danny Williams chapter 9 . 8/8 I have reread the story is still ale to keep me on pins and needles. All my favorite people are there,(cannot wait for next update. Story is filled with action and supense, Story could use more romance/sex scenes. |
Velin63 chapter 2 . 7/15 it's erza not ezra |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/1 Hey r u gonna give naruto someone special or give him multiple girl's |
Danny Williams chapter 9 . 3/3 Definitely enjoyed this story from start thru this chapter. Story has a character of it's own (very good). I like the action and suspense (could use a lot of romance/sex scenes) to make it even better, I like how the story bring cross overs and weave them into a family for Naruto. For partners Hinata, Ino no Sakura and of course the woman with the destiny, Know author has great plans for the story ( but needs to update) fans to expect updates. |
insanemaelstorm chapter 9 . 1/30 Pretty interesting story. I like how Naruto is becoming strong. I like how Minato and Kushina reacted upon waking up. Poor tsunade. Hope Naruto deals with Jiraiya. I am a bit apprehensive about the amount of crossovers though. Looking forward to reading more |
Irina Akashira chapter 9 . 1/24 Interesting fanfic Wishing to see more please Wishing that the friends can be saved too Anyway, don't consider credible that the patents simply send "all" their childs to the root program Even if the setting was quite different of the canon To begin with, if either the council would have so much power to "officially" force them against their will, or their parents were willy to send them there, they would have done from the beginning |
Enforcer209 chapter 9 . 1/6 Well it will be interesting where you take this story from here |
Danny Williams chapter 9 . 12/29/2019 Great story plenty of action and horror. Could use more romance/sex. Waiting for next update to story. |
gabelou1991 chapter 9 . 11/25/2019 Pas mal jaime beaucoup o. |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2019 44r cd c4r 33a cer l5 |
WanderingMercAsashi chapter 8 . 9/11/2019 Thank you for making Naruto weak. Honestly, it's unreadable due to the fact that these pander to Kishimoto's BS almost all around. |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/5/2019 please write more of this story |
god of all chapter 9 . 9/3/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
WolfCoyote chapter 9 . 8/24/2019 you shold have maybe the soul king .Byakuya and kenpatchi |
darth56 chapter 9 . 8/23/2019 thanks for the new chapter really like this story so far again thanks |