Reviews for An Extension of the Soul
Kevy The Chevy chapter 27 . 7/19
I'm going to say that the amount of horny and crack that this story radiates has escalated to hilarious proportions.

I for one, blame Blake for everything.
pay0505 chapter 8 . 7/7
For the next chapter jumping and landing on a stomach is wrong unless it a beer belly or muscle thats just wrong great story
Tetho chapter 12 . 6/16
If I was in RWBY-world, I would marry no I will marry Velvet.
Luine Mercury LWG chapter 27 . 6/10
I mean, assuming Adrian isn't the product of a prior relationship on Saphron or Terra's part, homosexual couples in the world of Remnant are just as capable of having kids as heterosexual couples (assuming he's biologically both an Arc [Saphron's] and a Cotta [Terra's]), Ruby can't be blamed for wanting to be sure Jaune's not pregnant since she didn't know better. Although if Adrian is biologically both Saphron's and Terra's son, that leaves the question of how (I'm assuming test tube baby or something since Remnant, especially Atlas/Mantle and their outposts/ embassies, are likely technologically advanced enough to come up with a solution to that problem).
Ferrett chapter 10 . 6/8
For this chapter, when describing the bastard sword, you can chamge it from oen-and-a-half sword to hand-and-a-half. It sounds better that way, and is actually said that way.
Nick Kane chapter 27 . 6/2
Best. Villain. Arc. Ever.
Zathol chapter 27 . 6/1
There is a hamster wheel in Ruby's head and its spinning but it not going anywhere! Someone teach her sex-ed! And jump star her puberty engine because apparently it's not turning over.

Looks like Adam and Neo have become friends. Progress.
razmire chapter 27 . 5/30
Ruby’s family keeping her in the dark about sex and everything related to it was a big mistake. Still, it does give us readers hilarious scenes like this to read.
Ultimate Kuuga chapter 27 . 5/30
Man, been a while since I saw this fic, feels good to have it back. Great chapter.
Argus456 chapter 27 . 5/29
*Snrk* Looks like the talk about the Birds and the Bees didn't pan out very well though at least those two dorks are officially together now and I can imagine how adorable their dating life will be from now on. And if it isn't for the dire news of Salem's minions and known criminals infiltrating his school, Ozpin would probably be celebrating the potential guarantee of the new generations of silver-eyed warriors. More so if he remembers that Jaune is from a big family.

And speaking of criminals, at least the partnership between Roman and the White Fang are starting out strong, relatively speaking that is though Neo seems to be having a lot of fun at Adam's expense. Would love it to be a running gag but I can't help but feel that it'd lead to hate-sex, well hate from Adam at least.

Still, with Adam now officially recognized as a murderer, I guess it's up to sweet little Caitlin to be the public face of the new White Fang.

Or Banesaw since his identity as a terrorist is technically unknown or he could be her bodyguard at the very least. Well, regardless of who ends up as the new face of the White Fang, at least they won't be harrassed too much given their blatant connection to Roman.

Blake on the other hand...
StallionWolf chapter 27 . 5/29
Poor socially inept Ruby. And I can see Nep doing that to Taurus...she seems the type to keep...dangerous individuals...on their toes.

And yeah, I'm sick of this virus. Mon works in a hospital...with COVID patients...and then uses the computer I would use to write...
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 27 . 5/29
Hahahhahah good one my friend also Oz and the gang talk about how Cinder got herself killed and Adam and Roman talk about their next plans
Nonyaarb chapter 14 . 4/22
Omg Nora. Way to turn the anxiety up to 11
Nonyaarb chapter 11 . 4/22
Nice
Nonyaarb chapter 10 . 4/22
Lol
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