Reviews for Phantasmal Blades-continued |
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jadasimone16 chapter 4 . 8/23/2019 Please update. |
kerrowe chapter 4 . 3/11/2019 Few times as possible is my preference. Fine with any transformations. Though no idea how you plan on even using them. |
Tiamatio chapter 1 . 12/7/2018 YOOO REDIRON WE CANON NOW |
kerrowe chapter 3 . 11/7/2018 Have the confidants seperate mostly for Lucina. Easier to make things more personal and developed 'usually' one on one. No problems with sharing teammates for links though, Lucina should get some of her own moments with them without Akira. I don't think Lucina would end up having the same exact confidants as Akira does anyways. Like the "Judgement" one. If Akira's confidants are the same as in canon the details about those don't need to be built up and detailed but, it should be if Akira makes a link with any new confidants like Lucina and James that should be be written with more detail I think. The story I shared with you before maybe able help you think of a good way to handle it. Through Its own ways. |
Tiamatio chapter 3 . 11/6/2018 The spider-web idea sounds like a great fit tbh. It fits the theme of thieves, a bunch of strangers tied by the strings of fate. It'll be interesting to see how you'll pull it off. Keep up the good work my guy! |
MadcapErikaSparkle chapter 2 . 10/21/2018 Like from Tiamatio's, will you be keeping the crackship between Akira and Lucina? For Lucina's possible persona, will it be something to remind us of Fire Emblem? Or something else that would fit Lucina? |
kerrowe chapter 2 . 10/16/2018 New person. Is he supposed to be a Joshua expy? Hope that works out. Naoto bit seems out of place... Wonder if we'll see her make a visit. |
Tiamatio chapter 2 . 10/12/2018 Nice new character! I wonder, is he gonna be a Confidant for Lucina's Confidant tree? Anyways, I love what you've been doing so far, keep it up! |