Reviews for A new beginning
Guest chapter 6 . 6/29
TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! FUCKING BASTARD! FUCKING USELESS! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU SON OF A BITCH!
KingOfEternity chapter 25 . 6/20
i can support his actions
blackdeath34 chapter 24 . 4/27
Seriously hope you continue this story, it’s my second time reading it!
nishchaysoccer chapter 25 . 2/19
It felt like the author couldn't write this story anymore so he just decided to do this and give a shitty ending.
IJ VA chapter 25 . 11/12/2019
Where is Edmond Dantes by the way and I wish the ending of the chapter was Gudao's nightmare and he prevent it or he need to summon Angra Mainyu
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 25 . 9/29/2019
Come on man... That ending was so unsatisfying. You totally ruined the story for me.
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 11 . 9/28/2019
How many cameras was Davinci using and what quality of recording was she doing? Because with modern tech that would take more than a few weeks with 30 cameras at Max quality. No joke. A terabyte is 1024 gigs, which is 1024 MB, and I've never seen a video go past 10 gigs for an hour of 8k video. Also, 8k video is super rare and the video I mentioned was 3d at 6 gigs. You have me imagining every square inch of that school and the surrounding being covered in 8k pro cameras taking Max quality video simultaneously! Imagine that bro! Wouldn't that be freaking awesome! You would probably have to be really careful where you step though... Might step on one! Lol I love that scene. Love your story too! Great work
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
what if the servents form a musicband
Silver566 chapter 24 . 8/2/2019
This is getting extremely convoluted
Silver566 chapter 3 . 8/2/2019
:Sad face: no achilles.
Lol nah its algood. At least Sigurd is here. Hope he and Bryn get some spotlight with the Norse coming up later on. Maybe Karna and Arjuna with the Hindu as well. Id love to see Indra's reaction.
And Fafnirs to Sigurd and Siegfried. Probably gonna piss himself lol.
Silver566 chapter 2 . 8/2/2019
His personality changed far to quickly.
Silver566 chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
Ok I like the precept...just please PLEASE dont make this a Gary Stu kind of fic. Let there be challenges.
phamdangnamhai2003 chapter 25 . 6/24/2019
What da fuk is dis?
Bring mah boi shirou (e). There is justice to against this ritsuka
Ultimate Kriemhild Gretchen chapter 25 . 6/24/2019
I sent you a pm. You might wanna check it out.
Guest chapter 25 . 6/23/2019
I dunno, this new 'drama' feels really weird.
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