dude, can’t you write in past tense? Of past continious?

Not to be nitpicky, but make sure to either get a beta reader or to check over your work for grammar errors. it would make your story even better and much more enjoyable!

This story is fantastic! Please don't let the haters impede your progress. This fic has humor, a bit of fluff, and it touches the right places with me. plus it doesn't diverge from canon too much. So keep up the good work! I look forward to the next chapter!

All around terrible grammar. Possibly because you ignore all critique, so you never get any better. Meh.

Loving this. hope to see more.

I'm enjoying this story, but I would probably like it more if the chapters were divided into smaller and more manageable chunks. Not everyone can read large chunks of text like I can.

the premise of the story sounds awesome. but I can't even get through the first chapter with all the grammar problems. great content though.

First of all I didn't read the story the first thing I read when this loaded was a huge rant so if I had to rate on a 1-5 scale 0.0000001 is what I rate that rant

I love it, I hope you continue it when you got the time

I don't even know where to start, I binged on this work of yours from start to finish in one go, the au you created is just perfect, oblivious cinnamon roll, 1a civil war for said roll in the making, everything is very good if not perfect some times, I think I saw a few grammatical errors but nothing hindering the story, you use thank all the time where thanks will make a lot more sense... I'm not a native speaker and I learned English from voice games so I can be wrong, I'm certainly going to wait for the continuation, you created one of my favorite au. we need more people like you here :D

This story is so much fun. Even if it's unlikely, I hope it continues. The interactions are fun and adorable, and you manage to balance the large cast really well.

I'm waiting the next chapter

So i know it's been two years but it'd be cool if you can update this

I love this but I don't hold much hope about reading the next chapter lol

I think you are doing a great job with the story. Keep it up