First chapter was dull, and it really nailed the low quality when you kept writing Voldermort... it's sad when a fan can't write the names and spells and locations the correct way.

Lol, I have a weird relationship with Harry escape stories, but I actually really enjoyed this one!
Short, logical, well thought out (really loved how you included LOGIC for why Dumbledore has Harry's DNA), and a nice ending that wasn't tedious or trying too hard!

Happy about a happy Harry, and that he and Sirius found their peace! :-)

bonne fic!
il y a un fic de Ten Toes qui ressemble un peu à ça
je crois que le titre est : pensez serieusement à ce que vous voulez (c'est en anglais).
mais c'est ce qui s'est passé après qu'harry et les autres soient partis

Short and logical plot to a different ending . I really liked it.

Thanks for the well-written short story! Very logical and clean. Quite original, too.

Epilogue was a great way to finish. I enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.

Ooops. Reviewed before noticing there was an epilogue. Nice one!

Thanks for sharing your story. I always enjoy stories where Harry & Sirius escape and live happy lives. I recall one where they'd escaped just after the Potters murders and ended up living on a ranch in Colorado so the only change I could suggest to the end of your story is to have a bit more detail about their lives in the US perhaps with a bit more fun eg I could see them playing tourist for quite a while as they have both had terrible lives up till their escape and they deserve a long holiday. As to Britain, I personally love the endgame where the purebloods get everything they want ( and deserve) ie V wins but all the muggleborns and halfbloods emigrate quickly leaving a pure britain - and then the economy tanks for lack of lackeys and customers, and the population dwindles because of all the inbreeding. REVENGE! (actually that's the plot of a short story I read). Good luck with your writing. I think you write well and I enjoyed your story.

Nice story.

Fun ending for the most part. Thanks for sharing!

It's great that Sirius decided to follow Harry to the US. Thanks for sharing!

A rather funny way for Harry to kidnap Sirius. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your story.

What if Summaries didn't need to be questions? What if redundancy is not a good thing? See what happens!

Simplistic and with quite a few holes but still readable. I like fics where Harry just walks away from all the nonsense at Hogwarts.

I read it all through in one session so that's a good sign of a page-turning readable story.

- Hip