This is one of the best White Collar fanfiction I have ever read! The flow is perfect. I would love to see more such stories. Please do continue!

This is really cute

Nice job. Thanks for sharing. I hope you continue on with it.

Definitely write more it is really good

Okey that was a new side of caffrey which fits him perfectly when you described it
Great writing, keep it up

It was pretty good. If you continue it will

I thought it was a very sweet story you showed Neal’s motivation for keeping his children hidden i’m sure June would open her home to the twins so that they could have their dad around al the time the children deserve to have more family than Neal and Moz June already thinks of Neal as a surrogate son and would be grandmother to his kids and the Burke’s will be a aunt and uncle
El is like a big sister to Neal anyway so these children will steal her her heart like they did mine i’ve Seen Matt interact with his real life boys so it’s easy to picture Neal as daddy