I like that Cantalo refers to Frieza as Frieza, and when referring to Cooler, as "Lord" Cooler. Feels more authentic.

Would be kinda cool to see the mc use his great ape transformation at least once. Seems to be a one time gimmick in the show to make way for super saiyan, and the kaioken.

Heh, glad to see this story go so AU with Coolers child. Didnt expect that. I cant wait to see what the culture of the PTO is like, and Kaido's experiences as a soldier in a sci-fi setting. I get the feeling he would put up a decent fight against those frieza soldiers if he was at full power. Speaking of which, that was a nice way to introduce galactic politics between the frieza faction vs the cooler faction. Let the games begin.

Heh, I'm actually really really glad that Kaido killed the other saiyan. Shows he has some of his saiyan heritage after all. What is a saiyan without his pride?

Keep it up! :D

I love this fanfic! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Like i said, stomp on his nuts... but HARDER.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so excited!

Great chapter.

Kaido stomp on his nuts.

The masterservant character introduction worked very well...mysterious the master was the more sinister of the 2. You've done a great job making me curious about them...they have depth and I want to learn their motivations and plans.

As for Kaido, he clearly is less bloodthirsty than the average saiyan has some complicated backstory issues...but he is still a Saiyan in the ways that matter. :)

Its fine, not all chapters have to have fighting in them.

My real concern is the spacing at the end of the sentence that says "...Planet Trade Organization could get Artiko in trouble." and "King Vegeta lead my people through the war with the truffles…"

I don't know if that was done on purpose or not, but i think a space should be added there.

Excellent work conveying the flow of the fight and the protagonists thoughts during it. Very few authors can do that well.

I wasn't expecting much, but i am pleasantly surprised how good this story is.

This deserves more attention.

Hey, this story is darn good! Well written, good characters/premise winner!

I like it! So when is this scene taking place relative to the destruction of planet Vegeta?

Amazing