the story is fine but i honestly don't like the pairing

So far so good but for the love of god don't follow the pairing because I'm sick of it. Like every fanfic with some orphan kid replace Naruto with the same shitting situation has the village scape-goat who has a shittier life than Naruto while Naruko lives a happy-carefree life always ends up together it's just get's annoying.

Muito bom o capítulo
Excelente kkkkkk

Gostei da interação entre Yuma e Neji

what is up with this emo shit

It is a nice story and deserves to get more favorites and follows the only reason it hasn't is because your starting isn't as good as the rest of the story and hope you would work on improving it. Other than that it is an excellent story and I look forward to reading the rest of the story that has yet to be written.

Good stuff. Glad Yuma got a little insight into his family. Also like how you characterize Danzo. Because of all the dark stuff he does, people often forget in his warped way that he does thing sto keep Konoha safe.

Minato: kill every single one of the bandits, leave no survivors.

Twelve years old girl: YES!

Corona-chan has been putting moves on Hayate-kun~

This became my fav story on this site.
Keep up the good work!

thats kinda bullshit you know... how can a boy with 2 weeks of training can last against
not one but two genin?
can he even use chakra
if it was al it takes for a civilian to last against ninja there would not be any need for ninja villages

Well I think Inari's story is a waste of words.

Finalmente

Estava com saudades dessa história
Quero muito ver mais o desenvolvimento
Que reviravolta agora
Peço que nao abandone ela
Estou curioso sobre a trajetória do Yuma

so uh no new comments so here have this

I really hope that you dont make kiba win this fight

I literally hope he beats Kiba down in the most satisfying way possible, you really made me hate that prick lol.