I feel like you rushed this. All the pent up tension and emotion just vanished. Neji is a little bit out of character as well. I really wanted more. (Still one of my favorites.)

love how you are writing this

This was awesome. Their characterizations are on point. I loved the intensity, the awkwardness, the deafening silence. It was probably the most realistic version of them I have ever read. And on top of that, it was funny. Great job

TT I don't understand. Did they end up together, or are they still splitting? I need someone to explain the ending and what that message that Neji wrote contained.

I AM CONFUSED

I just finished reading. I wanna call neji out on his bs. The break up was supposed to set Tenten free and I supposed it did but I think it was also about setting himself free more so then for her. The reason I say that is because he's aware of the scarfices she's continues to make for his sake and he's not willing to do the same. Tenten wrote A toast for Sasuke and sakura wedding and they dipped out because he didn't want to hang around with his uncle. That tells me he puts her second to himself. I feel like he should just admit that.

I think what struck me as odd the most was Tenten Acceptance. I would have though she put up a bit of fight after 10 plus years but maybe she was tired of how things were and it was just easier to let it go.

She just seems to submit to whatever he wants. Without much push on his in. That's sort of refreshing concept in this fandom.

Usually Tenten is enamored with neji so that's why she bends to his will. Or he pushes his way into getting what he wants. This Tenten just does because in her mind she knows neji enough to know his answer.

So kudos for that.

Thanks for writing this

I AM DYING OF CURIOSITY HERE. WHY THE F DID THEY BREAK UP? Five years is a long time for a relationship and my theories include one of them getting tired of their relationship and wanting out to try something new (Tenten, probably) or Neji allowing his doubts best him. Don't let my theories influence you, I wanna see your magic!

I've been busy lately so its just now that I took notice of your update and your reply to my previous review. To create line breaks, you click the 'Edit' button of the story file in your Doc Manager. You go to the part where you want to insert a line break and simply do a 'Shift Enter' and there you go! I've had this problem when I first started posting my fics as well.

Hope you update soon!

Amazing fic! I love it I can’t wait to read more.

I love love love this fic, it was super interesting to see how it starts from the break up and goes back in time. Though it would've been cool to see how they really got together I like that you acknowledged they're not at all a typical couple anyways so that point is moot. I love your characterization on neji too! Someone who can put into words what he wants when it comes to affection... it's kind of cute. I think the timeline of events confuse me sometimes but over all very cool fic! I've been waiting continuously for updates. - Catprinx tumblr

This. Is. SO. GOOD.
Please continue! I love it!
They are so in character! I can totally see them acting like that TuT thank you for this!

I can't wait to read more! I love all of this! #hooked

Got me hook, line, zinger my friend. Your writing has been fabulous so far, keep it up! Although I suggest making use of page breakers or line divisions in between scene transitions? Or anything to indicate to the reader that we're going back in time. I was sorta confused a bit, I lost my grasp on english haha. That's all! Love the introduction and the civility of their breakup where they're comfortable enough to pack each others stuff and decide which will go to whom. And also of course, lingering feelings! You did an incredible job on both chapters! Hope to read from you soon!