Well I fucken love this

Beautiful

That was great!

This was a really well written, the pace was perfect. Great job

Nice story

This was great. I especially loved the natural progression of it. And that moment of jealousy and Bella getting the girl’s name wrong over and over was hilarious.

2. CLAIRE YOUNG BITTEN The child's twin bodysuit to him with the best friends and siblings kids harder to the others then to late Volturi stepped in to execute her of a immortal child you there who created you pain then aaasaulted beated with them then EXECUTION Of Isbella Marie Lahote was brutal but more heartles with him weiped out of her tribe then with a immortal child guilty of your sinned live punished then torn her with her with them apart the four found her dead of completely blod loss lost blod then you die here her bscreams was heard I WANT HER I WANT DAWN READ SPIER! Felix kill her with immortal children her highest shriling tore ATOMIZED/VAPORIZED With them murdere from them then Executed by the Volturi extinct their race forever with as all of them too late were sinned but bought their corpses good found her draining from people they are guilty sentenced to death of Immortal children executed her with them with child blew apart god cremate them here then too late the cause of death was murder the head found the source a superbite so deadly heard noises what you done to me herself was iciest cold to her face with theirs was Sparkling in crystal diamonds bthen Blacking out with them sliced freely bought here both were forbidden to live with grown hybrid kids were immortal children a crime of the Vampire world Alice who did to her Volturi her own eyes are Venomous Falkor's red she's a nomad then found guilty of this one want Chained then her trial start we forbid you to consort with both ASHES Herscreams ilienced with theirs as Cullens are Varksat Snapped from here bring them here they are punished fromn us/they then vanished then too late popput pierced freely gone then the seer we have to train/teach them then gather witnesses then nulled no longer here bought here good dead of wall with blood then too late Bella struggled of her thirst and bloodlust was real from alien snakes of the planet Vulcan then first hunt to as all most monstrously then with the kids had kids were breeders then had as all of most children createrd a lot of members then then nuked from here were as all of them snapped torn from here bought here were all nulled cremated then too latte they were as all truest ashes more as all then stopped mating then were as all of them clamped freely pierced freely bought here they were cursed to Roam were now Immortal beings as all of them summoned by hosts then testified witnessed were as all of most hunted but sliced with them torn apart then no longer with remains good bring them they are deceased here now cremate them as all of them with pets/young deformned then lost blod then Atomized/vaporized now they were forbidden no longer alive then suddenly they were not aging with her/they had members had planet powers then became avenged beings who vowed to fight and were trained under her command but then suddenly Broken freely were snapped sliced freely bought them we report a legion is guilty of treason the sentence is death then no longer alive vaporized now too late most as all guards tonight they will be destroyed under us/they then too later a Vampire group we report of a crime two she is not guilty destroy them here they pleaded what Shiftpires they were destroyed then with them into ashes then lost from here bitten from here then too late we report they are dead good then Alice had a vision oh no you ok I Adapt Alice hold on Garrett her fingers letting one sharper squeeze crunched it is the Vulcan nerve pinch Ow that hurts good god Woman too late now Claudia's ESP Enhanced they know you had done blown in blacken ashes young/youth are angry of you as a Slayer a Vampire slaying super sailor soldier gasp they are coming for us who Volturi of most as all of members we fled to Vulcan blown they were most of them good guilty they bought them then as all of them were executed good they never return to Earth but three deported to as all with deported things with tribes to Vulcan but both fol;lowed nulled ripped here destroy them took control of this planet then too late no longer here then were as all of them nulled but wiped out but caused a lot of them had kids aged faster were breeders then nuked from here now unable to mate at all in a unified hive mind nuked freely bought as all of them then torn more that newest races emerged.

Thank you! I just loved it!

Super sweet! Loved it!

That was a really cute read! TTFN! JXB

Nice.

Great story!

amazing little story
I love Bella and Paul together

Great little story! Bella and Paul are my favorite characters from Twilight so of course I love the two together. Good Job!

Such an awesome story!