Reviews for The Strongest Ambition
Green chapter 1 . 2/1
Wow, that first chapter is just horrendous, so bad in fact that I don't think I'll be Able to continue reading
Face Yourself chapter 1 . 12/29/2019
Well I was going to just point out that the description would make more sense saying OC x two pairings since nobody is going to know who Alice is, given no character by that name exists in either setting you listed this being a crossover of. But... the writing is really, really bad. So bad that it doesn't really matter all that much what you put in the description after all, on top of being a multicross with other things that weren't listed.
bennibob chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
also you dont seem to be writing a story it reads more like a summary or even a screen pla. almost feels rushed. maybe when your done you could come back and rewrite it all and fill in all the gaps
bennibob chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
honestly was interested in this story, I like reading gamer fics but your writing style really annoys me. all the spaces with dots every paragraph and starting in the middle of a story is just off putting. to me, you seem to just jump into a story part way through andy0 your Alice story is just as bad. you dont start from the beginning you just seem to jump in and expect everyone to know what's going on. might come back to this later because theres not enough finished gamer fics but I'm leaving it for now
Sapphireweapon12 chapter 2 . 3/7/2019
Not a bad story. Not great, but not bad. Although your naming sense could use a bit more creativity? I mean, Scythe of Excalibur is really uninspired. Why not Fall of Avalon? Arturian Reaper?
nightshroud96 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
I wonder how is Hydranoid doing during all of this?
TheOrangeLord chapter 4 . 2/18/2019
How do you give someone PART of Infinity?
aspire5515 chapter 11 . 1/6/2019
holy fuck yes, abridged hellsing universe? abso-fucking-lutly, i wish that you could favorite more than once just because of this chapter.
Rawrking chapter 2 . 12/22/2018
Forgot to put this in first comment but this fic has nothing to do with overlord
Rawrking chapter 1 . 12/22/2018
Shit fic you just send your MC to a new world and she randomly starts helping out the characters there!?
Runeion chapter 10 . 12/15/2018
What about Draudillon Oriculus current ruler of the Dragon Kingdom and the great-granddaughter of Brightness Dragon Lord?
L.R4444 chapter 8 . 12/5/2018
Love this fanfic! Hope you put out a new chap soon, btw thanks for writing this fine piece of art.

P.S Try using Grammarly.
PikaMew1288 chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
Considering the sheer amount of powerful beings in the Multiverse, Alice should do something like give Sirzechs the Lore of The Kirby Series, TYPE-MOON, Dark Souls, Bloodborne and other things like just to show how small the Devils are in the Grand Scheme of things. Considering that Alice is a Campione, Does that mean that if she were to Time Travel to just before the Biblical God's death and kill him incognito that she would gain his power? Speaking of killing Gods would that also work on beings like Darkseid or the "Astral Being Void" from Kirby Star Allies who is also said to be a God in the lore or that Multiverse God from Dragon Ball Super who deletes Universes for fun or most of the Gods from Dark Souls or TYPE-MOON as well as DxD gods like Hades, Indra and other gods like them?
Runeion chapter 8 . 12/1/2018
It will be interesting to see Ophis and Alucard interact as being the parents.
Dominus1389 chapter 7 . 11/25/2018
Ships for lemon
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