Reviews for The apprentice
Swoogan chapter 1 . 7/23
Listened to darkest dungeon ost while reading this because yes, yes, and yes
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2019
Boring someone younger than me made this huh that's surprising. M8 just have a fun life idk its for shits and giggles I'm assuming. There's no way this should be taken seriously cause it's just trash. Haha gotta inflate my ego somehow baby. Just eh I smell the virgin in you writing this my guy.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2019
Man his mom is terrible
MeteorElDrago chapter 13 . 9/18/2019
Jesus Jaunes family is messed up I really hope they get their just deserves so keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter update.
Greer123 chapter 13 . 9/18/2019
Glad to see that Jaune's father cares for him unlike his mother and most of his sisters who only see him as a breading tool.
TTGLlol chapter 13 . 9/18/2019
Had the makings of a good story, but no clue why do the out of the blue rape thing
Could have been a serious would and thats it
Have to drop off the fic and preferably erase it from memory
Guest chapter 4 . 9/6/2019
This is where you went full retard. Never go full retard.
Hecseferblade chapter 12 . 9/5/2019
Did not expect them to be Faunus to be honest. Good twist tho
Charcoal wolf chapter 12 . 9/2/2019
Great chapter I can not wait till the next keep them coming
MeteorElDrago chapter 12 . 9/2/2019
Yay! Freaking finally Jaune got some god damn help! The bastard is more stubborn than a mule! Still glad he is accepting some help. But anyways great chapter keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter update.
Greer123 chapter 11 . 8/10/2019
Thank you for the new chapter of this story.
Roland's Blade chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
Far too misandrist for me to like
Minato chapter 11 . 7/21/2019
And now ladies and gents we're gonna have to wait another 2 months for the next chapter to come while the author says he's gonna update it next in his other fics but ends up doing something else entirely

Moving on from that rant, i was actually waiting for something bad to happen to jaune because of ruby's actions. Because she does alot of in my opinion stupid and dumb asf things in canon all the time. Plus i hate her idealogies so yah I'm kinda biased hehehehehe.

Anyway i look forward towards the next chapter even though like i said its gonna take months. Sooo untill next time boiz
MeteorElDrago chapter 11 . 7/20/2019
Great chapter but holy crap things got crazy very fast. So keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter update.
dracohalo117 chapter 11 . 7/20/2019
...Oh yeah Banesaw is in some deep shit when the girls find out.

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