| Reviews for Naruko: The Inheritor of the Juubi |
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   setokayba2n chapter 18 . 7/29 I for one liked it, I don't think it was that bad that it need a rewrite but is your story I guess |
| mateususantosu chapter 3 . 7/15 oh God, the next chapter is going to be pretty much cannon, I can feel it... she's gonna fail, Mizuki will manipulate her, she's gonna steal the scroll, bla bla bla... I hope I'm wrong |
| mateususantosu chapter 2 . 7/15 being honest, what a boring chapter... I just hope she grows up soon so I can stop reading about child abuse, something that this site loves to write and read |
| mateususantosu chapter 1 . 7/15 oh, so innovative this beginning... |
| Chisaki Kouu chapter 2 . 1/15 chapter 2: I think it's unrealistic how she went from "crying in pain" to "offering a bright smile" that quickly. She's like 4, so I'd think after getting beat up and crying, she'd still be sniffing and wiping tears, and in a bad mood. Hinata and Naruko's conversation started like nothing ever happened in the first place. |
| Chimera Hex chapter 9 . 10/22/2019 I don’t like the idea of Hinata killing someone like that. Scum or no, that is a brutal way to go. In hindsight, it does seem that this particular scene was incomplete. Not in the sense that context was missing, but that the characterization was paused surrounding the aftermath. I understand why she’d react the way she does - and to an extent, why it might not affect her normally - but it feels like the topic got smoothed over. (I realize I’m prodding a rather dangerous avenue right now.) |
| Koshiro Unohana chapter 8 . 10/19/2019 Nice |
| Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 3 . 10/13/2019 Ok so I’ve read this before and love it but I feel the need to point out that the clone jutsu is in fact a genjutsu ninjutsu hybrid jutsu and requires less chakra control than even the most basic genjutsu making the idea of learning a genjutsu before the clone without first learning to use the juubis eye unlikely |
| Monster King chapter 17 . 9/25/2019 Great job |
| Noy chapter 17 . 9/18/2019 Sorry but who in their right minds would want Fuu to be forgiven ? Fuck her ! I hope she died slowly and painfully ! |
| Saujana2 chapter 3 . 9/2/2019 is this fanfiction have another continent like temujin continent like in Naruto movie. Naruto: the legend of gelel stone. |
| Saujana2 chapter 1 . 9/2/2019 at least you fandoms is not cliches and still feel lore friendly. |
| mrjordanriver chapter 17 . 8/30/2019 Excellent fanfic with a huge surprising twist at the end. I hate that I must wait for more. I usually do not enjoy fanfics that change the characters' genders, but you pulled it off spectacularly |
| Juliandog5 chapter 16 . 8/15/2019 I'm doing this to follow the story! |
| Juliandog5 chapter 17 . 8/15/2019 See now I just have more questions and want more chapters! God I hope this doesn't just end here. |
