This is really sweet. I liked seeing them get over their differences for the sake of their kids X]

It was really neat to see both perspectives on this one conversation. The thoughts and connotations of the characters are at such a variance from each other that it read like a completely different conversation X)

I like the backstory with Loki, Jane and their little boy, especially the cultural differences between Earth and Asgard, and the difficulties facing their little family because of them. It's not a pairing I've read a lot of, and I think it posses a lot of really interesting difficulties for the characters to face.

This is GREAT! I wondered if that might be how this was gonna go down - lol. You write Tony SO WELL! Dad-Tony is wonderful, and the bits about him and Pepper adapting to parenthood were really sweet and honest. Big fan of this one X]

I love this soooo much, it’s too cute, why isn’t there more?!

If you do ever update, I’ll be right here, waiting to read! :D

I do wish you would continue this. It is such an adorable story. I love the name you chose for Loki's son. The nickname is even better!

This story is actually precious, I read this a year ago but I don't recall reviewing it so here's the appreciation you deserve! It's adorable, playful and true to the characters. I adore it and their respective children. They present traits similar to their parents and the little squabbles they have on horses is sweet. Good to see the healing stones come in handy. Very believable and intriguing hold they interact to each other and their own individual histories involving their wives and lives prior. I can't wait for more from this, indicted from the latest update! So cute and bound for a great tale.

Hi! After reading your last Beneath chapter, I kinda felt the need to read more of your writing - but something more fluff than angst. (and this one is faster than rereading Beneath, ofc). I think this third chapter is absolutely adorable, Ollie is adorable, Morgan is adorable and their blooming friendship is adorable, and an actual nightmare for Tony and Loki :) It will be fun to see them eat lunch together, and maybe in some future episode, to see Jane and Pepper join that lunch.

And I'm still hoping this fanfic ends with Tony giving Loki a job, because it pains my heart to see someone as talented as Loki without an occupation.

I am not going to ask you to update soon because for me Beneath takes precedence, and I am also more excited about the moment you introduce Loki in your fanfic No Other Choice and your overall plot there, but I still wanted to leave you a review to tell you how enjoyable this fanfic is, especially this third chapter!

Aww, I love this story! Loki and Tony are too cute in overprotective dad mode. I love how they reluctantly put aside their mutual dislike of each other for the sake of their kids. And only for their kids! Lol. Lots of feels here. I would love to see Loki begrudgingly agree to have lunch with the Starks. He can't disappoint Ollie, after all!

I am loving this universe! Tony’s and Loki’s motivations are clear and relatable. The minor conflicts you’ve created are helping to move the story forward in unpredictable ways, but without sacrificing the characters’ agency. And the way you can provide a chapter’s worth of exposition in one or two perfectly-penned phrases is amazing. Following!

My goodness, kids falling in kid love (possibly the best kind) is always entertaining

So sweet... the kids are friends and the dads have to cope! Thanks for sharing!

What a great surprise! I wasn't expecting this little gem this morning. This chapter was delightful. Oliver and Morgan are adorable and I can't wait to see how lunch goes. :-)

So this is wonderful, & I'm so glad you are writing & posting this story. Thank you!

This is a cute story. To be honest I did skim the parts I saw were repetition of dialogue. I hope you get to continue this.

I love it! I’m glad we got to see both of their viewpoints. I totally want those kids to be friends too :)