Reviews for Captive Bride
DragonWarrior318 chapter 35 . 10/2/2019
This was an amazing story. I was done very well. Thank you for writing it.
NollasBlack chapter 35 . 9/17/2019
Hello,

I can not believe it is over!

It feels subrreal! I need closure! hahahahaha

I am super happy because Shinyo came to see her and explain, I think it is something it would happen for real in the manga. I am very happy the law was written. And that everyone seems content.

NollasBlack
Saki-Hime chapter 35 . 9/16/2019
Loved the story, great way to end it.
NollasBlack chapter 34 . 9/9/2019
Hello, how are you?

Weren't you describing that the poison was a Grade A embeded with magic and no one knew how to handle it? But when Sakura woke up the nurse said it was a common poison... what happened there?

Otherwise, everything was fine, although I hate that Eva is that resentful and that Sakura is questioning herself.

read you soon,
NB
zeKaien chapter 33 . 9/2/2019
cliffhangeeeeeeeeeeeer aaaahhh hope they will survive
Mimiluvbug chapter 31 . 9/2/2019
I'm so happy Touya is coming to terms with everything. keep the bickering, not the hate.
NollasBlack chapter 33 . 9/1/2019
Hello, how are you?

OH NO! Please dont die ! For real.

NB
Lin Lu Lo Li chapter 33 . 9/1/2019
Hi. You really gave a twist to the story, I expected something with magic battle and blood (ok, there was blood, only Sakura's -snif-). I n3ver expected poisonning. Poor Syaoran, he feels like crap. Now to wait that Sakura and the baby be well
Saki-Hime chapter 33 . 9/1/2019
OMG i will decide on the killing depending on the outcome of the surgery. Also, why is she in surgery? it was poison and inducing labor does not require surgery.
Lin Lu Lo Li chapter 32 . 8/26/2019
Not. boring at all! I like how you describe the interactions. bettween charactwrs. How boys worry about Sakura and how she and Touya came back to good terms. The cakes, and how Sakura worries a out being momm, like any normal expecting mom. I'll wait for another cimax in your story
NollasBlack chapter 32 . 8/26/2019
Hello, how are you?

Not boring at all... yes, a bit slow, but not boring. It was a glimpse to simple life between them.

Read you soon,
NB
NollasBlack chapter 31 . 8/19/2019
Hello, how are you?

I am glad Touya is cooling off. Sakura is really happy about being among family.
I am worried about the murder threat... if Meilin hasnt found anything...

Read you soon,
NB
Lin Lu Lo Li chapter 31 . 8/17/2019
It is so finny warchimg Touya struggling for liking Syaoran, and it was lovely Sakura worrying about
Syaoran and more he apologizing
Saki-Hime chapter 31 . 8/17/2019
Aww how lovely.
zeKaien chapter 30 . 8/10/2019
ahhh new update, thank you so much. i don't feel that the pace of this chapter is awkward so i guess it's fine. touya's treatment of syaoran is quite understandable and somehow, i'm grateful that you made him that way because otherwise, it wouldn't be touya at all. looking forward to how syaoran will get him to accept him. please take all the time you need to write the next chapter, no rush! looking forward to it
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