Reviews for Innocence & Instinct
keybladelight chapter 5 . 6/3/2019
It was interested that noct is still desperate to go back to is old home world but i hope he get better and the star child boy is seeing more of noctis memories i hope that noctis spend more time with the star children's he is a father so he need to act as a father and a king, so that make is kids the prince's and princesses of lucis but i really hope that noct reveal to is news friends and is children's that he is from another world and he is a king and that make is kids from royalty and hope vanessa try to flirt noct to make her queen and that but the girls that will appear in the future chapter super jealous and envy that they gonna try to married noct so that they could became a queen in a eos in the kingdom of lucis.

Did you play episode ardyn.

Is there a chance that the conception characters could go with noctis world 10 years of darkness and they see noct body is now of a adult a is star children's became teenagers (from the change of world and time) and hope they meet the friends of noctis of eos.
The Big Pickle chapter 5 . 6/2/2019
Also just a reminder for anyone who take this the wrong way. I meant to spell "Hot Dogs"
Not "hit dogs"
Ceridwen Lucius chapter 4 . 3/9/2019
"...without sounding like a dad and which will make him feel more awkward..." AWWW! So precious. I could just picture the blushed cheeks and unbelievable awkwardness so easily.
Nikolas. I rather like that name for him.
"Why does it always have to be snakes?!" Indiana Jones fan, I presume?
The whole God's gift thing still cracks me up. Yes, I suppose he really is God's gift to women.
Yay! They're friends again!
The apple bomb was hilarious. Prompto is my sunshine. "My leg!" Another Spongebob reference. I hope so because I heard that damn fish screaming that line.
Congrats on breaking your record! Keep up the hard work.
keybladelight chapter 4 . 3/5/2019
Well noct as been forgive and one of is star child saw the memory of the king and noct sanity broke that it is really plot twist and another star child is born i can already see ignis disappoint gladio angry and prompto crying blood tear of jealousy i hope to know what Charlotte want noct and the masked strange hou us behind the mask and good reference of spongebob squarepant my leg as joke hope to see the next chapter and play the dlc episode ardyn.
Ceridwen Lucius chapter 3 . 3/3/2019
Fastest pregnancy and easiest birth EVER!
Poor Chlotz. He'll have to cope somehow.
Ceridwen Lucius chapter 2 . 3/3/2019
The whole God's gift thing amuses me for so many reasons. I like the little ways you draw Ignis, Prompto, and Gladio into the story.
Ceridwen Lucius chapter 1 . 2/16/2019
Drunk Prompto is frigging hilarious. I would love to read a longer scene of that. He's a big enough dork when he's sober, and he's wonderful.

Noct transitioned well to a completely different world. No time like the present to start kicking ass and taking names no matter where the hell he is. I could so see him being that way.
kerrowe chapter 1 . 1/22/2019
Things kinda just happened quickly. The masked thing didn't seem all that important.
Interesting for what I saw though.
WagnerFlin chapter 3 . 1/13/2019
Great job man! Despite being a 'filler' type chapter, it was honestly interesting. His small mental breakdown/depression was completely understandable and inevitable. Hopefully he get himself together. Of course with help and support of his new friends, I think he will have good to reason to keep fighting for. Looking forward to reading the next chapter bro.
keybladelight chapter 3 . 1/12/2019
Why the mysterious person want with noct he is not from thia world and he know that hw is a king and is noct will grown in is 10 years adult and is noct new friends are going tp eos and see him becoming a king.
WagnerFlin chapter 2 . 12/14/2018
Great chapter as usual. Really liked it man. Looking forward to reading the next chapter XD
keybladelight chapter 2 . 12/9/2018
Does noctis new friends will know that he came from another world and he is a king from a kingdom and he must sacrifice is live in order to save is world.
Ichika4594 chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
Excellent and great chapter
theallaroundnerd chapter 1 . 11/2/2018
Well I'm curious, why a special thanks to me? Also I want you to know that Type 1 Positive, after reading it multiple times, sounds like some sort of disease.
WagnerFlin chapter 1 . 10/29/2018
Great chapter 1 bro. This is starting look promising. Looking forward to reading the next chapter :D