Reviews for Before He Fell
alxxman chapter 16 . 3/24
Hi! Just wondering if you were still planning on rewriting this bad-boy? No rush! Just asking :)
Nad19 chapter 10 . 3/20
ugh why the heck?! I though we're gonna get Loki/Hermione here? oh come on.. seriously? ugh..
liasora chapter 8 . 12/3/2019
Can I ship Hermione and Loki please? Can you make it as the main pairing please? Since Hermione just ate the golden and immortal apple.
Gale13 chapter 16 . 6/3/2019
I will be looking forward to it
Gale13 chapter 8 . 6/2/2019
lol That is one way to get ahold of one of the prized apples. No need to go through Asgard politics.
Gale13 chapter 7 . 6/2/2019
Awesome
Definitely Sakaar she just landed on. I knew that is where the portal connected when she first looked in. She can get to Asgard there in a round about way.
Gale13 chapter 5 . 6/1/2019
Mwahahahaha Asgard beware the dreaded Hermione is coming for you and your library too.
Gale13 chapter 4 . 6/1/2019
Wow
Gale13 chapter 2 . 6/1/2019
The last huh.. well I am glad it won't be.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/16/2019
I really liked how this story is different to most! Hope you post soon
Minna Vipera chapter 16 . 3/21/2019
I’m sad you’ve lost the passion for this one, I really like it. I’m going to try to keep an eye out for the rewrite, but would it be possible for you to just put a notice on this story when you upload the first chapter?
Btw I think you are a great writer, especially for one so young! Keep going, I’d love to read more
MilandaAnza chapter 16 . 2/16/2019
Hmmm I was enjoying this but I can see how you couldn’t keep going until iw2. I’m sorry you feel done with it but I hope the next one comes soon. I enjoyed your writing and the pairing a lot. Can’t wait for the next one!
abne chapter 16 . 2/14/2019
Sorry you lost your love for this fic, but I'm glad that you're leaving it up for us. You definitely surprised us with the pairing switch, but I fell in love with Hermione and Valkyrie. All the best with your new story! I'll be keeping a lookout for it.
ElianaxIsabella chapter 14 . 2/10/2019
I really feel this was a bit of bait and switch pairing wise. No mention of Valkyrie as a character and I was expecting (based on all the signs) for it to be Loki and Hermione. It felt like Hermione and Valkyrie were just kind of forced together in some weird off shoot where the main plot went on a sabbatical. I mean it’s cool to do whatever pairing you want in any story but I feel it should be mentioned or something so that those who are not particularly into certain pairings, won’t feel how I feel at this moment. You have an interesting idea and I hope it treats you well.
James Birdsong chapter 15 . 2/5/2019
Fantastic
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