Thanks for the chapter

Maybe you could have V and Urizen show up in the Grand Line? Would be cool to see how Vergil will be like in One Piece, and how the Straw Hats would react to him as well, Only Problem is how will Nero, Lady, Trish and Nico get too the One Piece Verse?

The pacing of the story is too fast due to skipping over of many events and explanations. You are assuming every reader remembers every event distinctly and just glance over it. It takes away from screen time of Strawhats. If your intention of this story is to be Dante as a oneman show than its alright but you claim the story to be about the crew as whole with Dante playing the main role than you should slow down your pace appropriatly(by your creative choice) by including as much as you can instead of skipping.

You mentioned Dante absorbed Diablo's black crystal core after destroying him while inside the portal. What power does it give him?

Ah , a crossover I always wanted. Your writing skills are excellent. Personalities and dialogues are written well for Dante. Though interactions between him and Zoro and Sanji is what I am looking forward to but since this is still a story in its early stages I will have to wait. As far as powerscaling is concerned Dante needs to be nerfed since his speed,strength(ftl reation and travel speeds and monstrous strenght even in base post dmc2/4), crazy broken abilities, haxxes, immunities and resistances(check Vs battle wiki) means writing him into the story will be a challenge which i am excited to see how you tacklethis. Since One Piece is a heavy character driven story you will have to make sure strawhats do not get sidelined, and Dante develops proper chemistry with the crew via anlaysing their characters and backstories as he learns them as story progresses and allows/helps them to develop thier character and strenght without sacrificing his own role in story.

Good

hancock?

This is one of the best crossovers I have read. The carachters are all well written and presented and the story isn't fully canon but full of nice twists to the story (which is something alot of Xovers don't do very well). This story has gotten of on a great start so please, please update soon!

AWESOME ! You have made Dante a great entry in history. I can’t wait for you to update story. This is a really good cross that deserves attention.
It is a good idea to show how Dante was able to get the Balrog, since the game doesn't say a word about it.
I hope Dante will have with him the whole available arsenal of his Devil arms.

only complaint I could give is that there are a few minor spelling errors here and there, they don't really detract from the story, which is very interesting so far, but they are there. aside from that, dante feels like dante, and the diablo bit was both interesting and not too much.

I wanr more

I did not expect to see Balrog here. What a picture you described of him. Now the crew has gotten to see a bit of Dante's strength, I can only wonder how they'll react during and after the fight?

holy shit i founr this story about an hour ago and i Absolutely LOVE IT more of our resident badass demon slayer dude more

"a little"
Heh.
Dante showing off a little this chapter was great, him showing off a lot next(?) will be even better!

LETS A ROCKAAAAAAA. cant wait for the fight